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WAY too busy. On opening the topic, the first thing my eyes went to was the 8-like symbol on that magic rune thingy. The title 'ravin' only appeared after a couple seconds of searching. A title should:
1) tell the player what the name of the game is
2) highlight the name in a fairly simple fashion.
Too much business is destructive towards a title.