New HK Farmer

[Samboy]

Just a HK farmer I made:

http://img80.imageshack.us/img80/14/hkgunfarmeryd0.png[/IMG]

Post critique, constructive criticism and comments.

 

[Balore]

Looks great. Could use some shading though.

 

[Erk]

yeah, his shirt in particular needs more detail. His pants are good but there is not enough contrast - that goes for all your colours. Off to a good start though.

 

[Samboy]

Just wondering, what do you mean more contrast? I suppose the difference in colours. I'm sure that the hair could be darker, and the shirt could have more difference in contrast (I think I'm correct.)

Oh, and just to stop this being spam, i'll post a couple of other pics.

Nude German with Luger:

http://img171.imageshack.us/img171/6558/hklugermz5.png[/IMG]

Nude German in Action! (Please excuse bad pun):

http://img167.imageshack.us/img167/9559 ... mxpns2.png[/IMG]

The bolt moves, smoke from gun (barrel and chamber), cartridge falling and there is also a really small (and bad looking) hand recoil. I plan to fix that in future.

I'll also be making some different poses for the farmer, and a reloading for both the Luger and the rifle. CC & C please.

P.S. Oh, and i'll fix up the shading for you, Erk. Thanks all.

 

[Mascarpone]

Farmer ... ? I was expecting a Rake and Hoe, not a Shotgun. Not much to be said that hasn't been said already. Keep chuggin' Waddle-dee

 

[NexS]

yeah, by contrast, he means that the difference in colours need to be greater... like the shadows are darker and whatnot

but i like the gunman, nice