New DOJ Main Character Template/Sprite

[|3_32]

Well, I've not posted in a while, so I figured it'd better be a good post to return with, so here goes.

The main character WIP of the main character 'Lexx' from my own project Drops of Julkit [DOJ] High Adventure.

http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb13 ... late-3.png[/img]

I'm currently working out the torso movements, as I'm pretty stuck without them.  Here is the three stages of the legs thou

Stage one [aka the merry jig]
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb13 ... ed-2-1.gif[/img]

Stage 2 [The Walk of Life]
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb13 ... ed-2-2.gif[/img]

Stage 3 [Running Man]
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb13 ... ed-3-2.gif[/img]

The merry Jig was the first attempt which uber failed.

But for now I could use any C+C on what I have so far, so I can add them too my touch up list.

 

[Axerax]

Personally I feel that the walk should be less pronounced when in stride, it gives the same effect of the run. Running would be good for sprinting more than running, but that is me. I won't comment on the jig, I have nothing to say about it. Hope that helps.
~Axe

 

[Devon Jacobs]

The hands are a little bit to big in my opinion but that is about the only bad thing I can see so far, it looks great though.

 

[Impreza]

Hey, it's 3_32!

Long time no see... I see no problem with the sprite but his hand seems big compare to his arm or stomach... Other than that I think it's great and you animated it greatly with proper shading.

 

[|3_32]

I should have explained the big hands, as its part of the template and what I was going for, so not changing those.

Not sure about what you were saying about the stride on the walk, looking like he's running .. but hey ho, if thats all people could see wrong, I'm more then happy to move on :>

http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb13 ... tled-4.gif[/img]

This still needs work on the various points of shading on the arm.

 

[Axerax]

I was saying that the strides are to long to simply be used for a walk, shortening them would look more like a walk than a speedwalk that you have here.

 

[|3_32]

Ahhh, ok then.  I understand now.

http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb13 ... tled-5.gif[/img]
However I Just finished a bit of the running, gonna have to move the torso, do the gloves, and generally clean up the shading.  But the movements down I think.

 

[Sonata]

Absolutely amazing! The hands aren't really a problem though, they're part of the style.

 

[|3_32]

Thanks :>

I'm currently working out the hair, as you can se, its wrong atm.

http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb13 ... tled-7.gif[/img]

 

[Sonata]

That looks like a good first frame, It just needs some movement. I also really don't like that one piece of hair coming from the side.

 

[Axerax]

I absolutely adore the sprite style btw. It is smaller than HK, bigger than RTP, and just as cute as breeze with it's own style. I absolutely love it.

I'd like to try your game whenever it is ready, this would be one I actually try.

 

[|3_32]

Well, once I get a demo sorted, I'll post all about it.

http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb13 ... tled-9.gif[/img]

I'm gonna cut the back left hair movement out, as it doesn't add anything, just annoys the eye.  I think that it'll do as far as movement goes.  Now to move on :D

 

[Berserker]

HAIL TO THE KING.
Hey juuni, awesome sprite, it looks great and the movement is superb(to my knowledge)
I look forward to what else you can show :D

 

[Samboy]

This is great. I like the disproportionate hands and feet; easier to detail and easier to see detail.

 

[CeruSkye]

I really dig the style of your template. Nifty! =)

 

[Xcelled]

Wow that looks very professional, and the way you shaded an animated it is very smooth great work.

 

[Toshi]

I really love the template.
I cant wait to see the whole templates.
This rocks more than the HK-template.

 

[Swordhunter]

Its amazing!! It looks so proffesional @_@
Will it be for free use? If it will Im so gona use it!

 

[zeldrak]

This template has a lot of potential in it. I can't wait to see it finished :D

BTW, will you be trying to make an 8-direction template?

 

[|3_32]

A lot of potential, are you some sort of cunt?  Who starts a post with, "Hmm yep, its got potential" You trying to insult my work, thats basicly saying, theres shit loads wrong with it and I'm not going to tell you.

Also, Once I've gotten the first chapter in my game complete, which would give me a lot of character sets on this 6x4 template, I'll think about extending it too 8-directions.