New composition (free resource!) - Running Bells

[aphadeon]

Hey guys!
Created a new piece- I think I'm getting better at this
If anyone wants to use it for anything (commercial or otherwise), feel free. Credit is appreciated, but not in any way required.

I would however like to know what you think of it. Please critique. If you don't like it, I'd really like to know what you don't like about it.

http://bb.hbgames.tk/upload/Running Bells.ogg

Thx!

 

[Juan J. Sánchez]

The sounds effects are nice and well-thought. The theme, on the other hand, seems a bit blurry at times. It needs to be more concise. There are moments when it seems more like a random assortment of bell sounds, rather than a central theme. Finally, I think it ends rather abruptly, and its unpleasant.

 

[aphadeon]

Sorry about the ending - it was designed to be a loop. You're right, I should have set that up a little better (was more focused on hiding the loop point than creating an actual ending.) Thanks for the comments, I will keep them in mind as I continue to develop my composition skills.