new character. Same template

[joakkar]

I'm trying to create more templates for my battle animations

http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y78/jo ... reedan.png[/img]

Does it look good? I tried to make it look more serious

 

[Sonata]

It looks pretty good. I think the left foot should have more curve to it though. The left arm also looks awkward. I also think you should stick with the palette from your other template, this one looks too yellow.

 

[joakkar]

I know but he's not really human, so it's not a problem if he looks a little yellow xD

 

[Sonata]

Okay, you still may want to re-work your palette though. The shades on his chest seem like they don't quite fit.

 

[joakkar]

Yeah, that's actually the default kaizer pallete xD I'll try to fix the chest but it's too difficult t the moment  :dead:

 

[joakkar]

(sry for double post, but I was supposed to improve this xD)

http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y78/jo ... edan-1.png[/img]

The chest took an awful lot time  :dead: I used street fighter sprites as a reference

Is it better?

 

[Sonata]

Much better. His muscle structure is very well defined now. I still think his left leg and arm look off though.

 

[moog]

Im just going to ask, since you did Will, is this supposed to be Freedan? :3

 

[joakkar]

d'uh    :huh: I forgot to put that in the first post xD
Yes, he is :D I'm trying to make all fighters from the quintet games. (I just wanted to try illusion of gaia first  :thumb:

But I need to make templates first because I want to make the sprites in different outfits.

http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y78/jo ... edan-3.png[/img]

Update: tried to fix the left foot by (tilting?) it a little

 

[Xaixis]

Oooooh!!! I thought it was a female template!

 

[moog]

Awesome then. Good luck with this, its off to a great start.

 

[Lexy]

Looks pretty cool. I hope to see the whole template in the near future.

 

[fucbillgates]

That looks cool.
I thought it was a girl at first too, You did a great job fixing the chest.

 

[paulalankelly]

Oooooh!!! I thought it was a female template!

So did I until I saw the muscular one.

Anyway good look with this!

 

[Fayte]

I think you should turn his left foot (our right) a little bit to the front because the way it is now it looks like a very awkward position. Basically imagine yourself trying to stand the way he is and still have a nice sturdy balance.

 

[joakkar]

Done

http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y78/jo ... edan-4.png[/img]

Like this?

 

[Tansred]

awesome, but compared to the rest of his body his face lacks detail.
Try giving him a nose, raising the mouth a little bit, or lowering the contrast from skin to eye.
As for his left hand, the thumb goes OVER the fingers.

 

[Samboy]

His ankle is not recessed enough on his left leg. Recess it from the calf by a pixel, and it should look right.

Pretty good though.

 

[joakkar]

Is that enough?

http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y78/jo ... edan-7.png[/img]

Now I should probably try and add the same details into the first one  :down:

 

[Samboy]

Looks fine to me.