Neofolis

[Impreza]

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NEOFOLIS[/FONT]

CHAPTER II IS OUT!!

Spoiler: Introduction

This is an Episode Project which has been completed by me in December but I have no confidence in releasing it.As of now,I think it is better to post this and try my luck.This project is an Episode Project meaning it is more likely a TV series which divided into several chapter.As of now,(8 February 2007) the first chapter available at the Download Section and have two version of it.I highly recommended the second version as it's is the improve version of the first.

UPDATE! 26 February:-Finished and posted the Second chapter of the series.

THE STORY[/FONT]

Spoiler: Synopsis

This is a story which sets in a not-too-distant future where the world was moved by the ancient relic artifact which nowadays people called it as the RAID.A conflict involving this ancient legacy drive humanity into the edge and chaos to the world.Follow the story from the eyes of a young Trigger which accidentally encounter Rin,a Seeker.Together,they embarks journey of endless adventure.[/FONT]

CHARACTERS[/FONT]

Spoiler: The Cast (More will be added as series progress)

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ZINT[/FONT]â„¢
Age : 14
Status : Trigger
Description : A mysterious boy who is skilful fighter and also a Trigger. Apparently,he only care for himself anything related to money.He hired by Rin, agirl Seeker to be her bodyguard.A cold and violent looking boy with uncover past who wields a Raid which appeared from his right hand in form of a Skull [Rank: C, Ability: ???].

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RIN[/FONT]
Age : 16
Status : Seeker
Description :An average and typical young girl in her early teen age. Despite being a fragile girl,she is determined and strong-willed Seeker who embark a journey in finding the secrets of RAID.Accidentally meets with Zint and hired him as her bodyguard.

GLOSSARY[/FONT]

Spoiler: Glossary (More will be added as series progress)

RAID[/FONT]
An ancient legacy which was discovered along with the fossils.It is an unexplainable artifact which exist in various from such as a knife,stick, etc.which has been sealed a certain power inside it.The existance of Raid makes the human competing for each other to find the greatest of Raid.

Spoiler: How Raid's work

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A Trigger (Raid's user)conjure their Ki,or spiritual energy.The amount needed is depending on a certain Raid.The more powerful the Raid,the more Ki,it cinsumed.The Raid (A sword in the picture) will be feed by the Ki,thus giving it power and consumed it.As a payback,the Raid abilities,(Fire in the picture) is released.Different kind of Raid have different kind of power/abilities.

TRIGGER[/FONT]
A Trigger,is a main theme in Neofolis is a special titile given to the user of Raids.A Trigger can succesfully manifesting their Ki(Spiritual energy) either by training,born with it or in near-death experiece.Like their namesake, Trigger,they actually trigger the Raids hidden power by feeding it with their own Ki.

SCREENVIEW[/FONT]

Spoiler: In series screens

The first chapter screens:-
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The Second chapter screens:-
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DOWNLOAD[/FONT]

Spoiler: Chapters Download

The first chapter link:-
Chapter 1:Meeting of Fate? (First Version)
Chapter 1:Meeting of fate? (Second version) *recommended

The Second Chapter:-
Chapter 2:In The Rain

 

[shadowfox]

well..there's not much to say..I kinda liked it but after awhile I got kinda confused since there were lots of grammatical and spelling errors. The story seems kinda cliche but I guess most games are. I did enjoy the mapping although i did see some errors, although some were barely noticeable at first glance. I like the animation you used to express their emotions.

Oh I dunno if its just me, but during second part of it, the message box kept shaking, which was very distracting and making it hard to read and understand what was going on. I dunno .. might be me.

well..that's all I gotta say for now =/

 

[Impreza]

@shadowfox:Sorry about that.I didnt't realized that I put the link for the first
version.The second version link was being put up and the second version
corrected problem in the first one.It also add some new scene and delete
some scene from the first version.The second version promised more action
filled.

Episode 1:Meeting of fate? (Version 2)

 

[shadowfox]

ok..I'll take a look at it alittle later today and I'll post my feedback on it.

 

[Magicant]

Well, I played it, there seems to be alot of 'Engrish'/typos, and the idea of the raid situation seems ALOT like the esper thing going on in FF3(6). On another note, the Music was nice to listen to and the maps were great. I'll keep an eye on this, also let me know if you need any help fixing the typos.

 

[Makasu]

Thats some beautiful mapping you have there...I'll have to check this out when I get home from school. Besides the spelling errors [[which can be fixed]] I like what I've read/seen so far. ~enjoi

 

[Roman Candle]

Nice to see this in the full projects forum at last

 

[Impreza]

Looks like I've got a good comment.I planned to end this project as I'm starting a new series.But now,I'm confused wether to continue this or go on with my new series.Hrm...

Anyway,thanks for the comment.It looks like my effort hasn't gone into a waste.

 

[Pureaura]

You really should continue with this and see where it takes you . It has been great so far, but just needs the english improved a bit, and if you do decide to continue making it, I will be watching each one released

 

[Chromaticed]

Damn it this is grate I wish you good luck on this project. its kick ass

 

[Impreza]

CHAPTER TWO IS OUT !! [Download]

UPDATE:
Finally,I decided to continue this.So,Chapter two entitled: In The Rain was released.The download link is in the mainpost and also in the upper link of this post.Some new infos including the cast,glossary and screenview was updated.

NOTE:
Next chapter will be released a little bit longer because there will be some graphical inprovements.The third episode will be longer and more battles (atleast that is what I'm planned).Until the next chapter,keep posting in this thread and give some of your thought about the series.

 

[plugz]

Your tilesets are beautiful.
Good job.

But your storyline came from a japanese manga called "Satan" right? :yes:
I've read it already.

But i'ts still fun and attract when it's changed to your game.

Keep trying. Cheer! ^^

 

[Lio]

On the first glance,I would say this is another episode series.But,as I try this, I think it's pretty awesome.You have animated battle scene and also there is a nice mapping there.I just downloaded the first chapter.I will try the second next. I don't know why it seems doesn't get too many attention like other series.Just keep them on and I'll be watching this.

P.S:Only flaw I could think right now is the 'typo' but it's fixable.

 

[Impreza]

Your tilesets are beautiful.Good job.

Thanks for the compliment.It just RTP with some minor edits tough.

storyline came from a japanese manga called "Satan" right?

It's been credited of course.I just "borrow" the concept there and will span into fully original plotline.

You have animated battle scene and also there is a nice mapping there

It's pain in the ass process to animated those.But,at the end of the day,I seems to be improved my spriting with this project.

I don't know why it seems doesn't get too many attention like other series.Just keep them on and I'll be watching this.

Hoho,that's tough.Yeah,maybe this series isn't really great than the other. Seriously,I need some more comment and critics in this.I don't even sure if anyone is following this series...':|

Anyway,thanks for the comment and bear with me till the next chapter.

 

[MistTribe]

If you ever decide to discontinue this series, may I continue it for you? I'll give you full credit as the original author and try my best to meet your expections. I'd hate to just see his series, "die out".

 

[Mezmerize]

Chapter 1 intro needs major improvement imo, but the mapping is good... I'll edit once I'm done playing through it.

EDIT:: Nevermind. I can't sit through this game. The grammar is killing me.

 

[Impreza]

If you ever decide to discontinue this series, may I continue it for you? I'll give you full credit as the original author and try my best to meet your expections. I'd hate to just see his series, "die out".

I had already PM you about it.We settle it there.

Chapter 1 intro needs major improvement imo, but the mapping is good... I'll edit once I'm done playing through it.
EDIT:: Nevermind. I can't sit through this game. The grammar is killing me.

It's encrypted you can't edit them.

Basically,I don't know why this thread is necroposted from it's death.And this series is 'DISCONTINUED'.Sorry for someone who's been following this series (If there's any).Anyway,I had worked on a new episode-project.And this time,I had totally revised since this project.So,I would like to say mod,you could close this thread.

IMPREZA

 

[Tana]

So,I would like to say mod,you could close this thread.

When you want a mod to do something, Please use the Report button.