Need some comments and crits :)

[Vans]

Hi guys, Im working on some sprites for my rpg game and I'd like some comments from you guys:

The outlines kinda bug me but I dont know how I could make them look any better than that :/

Thanks,
Vans

 

[bacon]

The first problem I noticed is how disproportionate the bodies are. The arms are super tiny. Maybe make tha arms a tad bit bigger.

If you are going for a cartoony look, then the black outlines are fine,(to me anyways) If you are going for a more realistic look, then get rid of the black outlines and use darker shades around the edges. I sort of like them and think they are cute :D

 

[Vans]

What about now?

and a example:

 

[LiquidMetal91]

Hmm, the first are more cute...
Though the edited are more realistic.

So it's more of your feel to it

Gr. LM91

 

[The Panda]

I'd say take the arms off your new one and toss em on the first one and you're good :thumb: The first ones look a lot better imo and are extremely adorable ^_^

 

[green raven]

great stuff new guy. reminds me of walkingabominations stuff.
The small arms on the first template didn't bother me at all. But the outlines are a little jagged, It would definently benefit from some more aa on the inside.
And the template doesn't have a lot of contrast, but the outfits seem to make up for that.

all in all keep it up

edit: use imgzoom "

 

[silver wind]

I like them, unique and cute. :thumb:
I have a feeling the small legs will look weird when walking.

 

[brainstorm]

The New one is a lot better. Despite the anatomical catastrophies, this is actually pretty nice. I would use it... can i use it?

 

[mufffin]

Hmmm i see a variety of clothing style liking it.

 

[purple_tegami]

I've just recently started getting into pixel art, so I can't really give you too much in the way of suggestions. But I do like way you did the spiky hair. The only thing I could think of is to do something to diversify the head of the green sprite (second from the right in your first post), it looks less detailed than all the other ones. But I think these are really cute so far.