Need opinions

[Swordhunter]

I started working on a tamplate in a rtp size so it fits to all the rtp tilesets but has more detail to show the the RTP. I need opinions on how it looks. Somthing about his body doesn't seems right..

http://img56.imageshack.us/img56/999/westerngx2.png[/imgZOOM]
Note: I used Despain's pallet (I hope he don't mind)

UPDATE:
http://img258.imageshack.us/img258/2632/westernvm7.png[/imgZOOM]
brought the shoulders a bit down

 

[killeryunran]

It looks fine, only the colour of the skin looks a little odd. For the rest
it looks really fantastic :thumb:Alto he needs some clothes and some hair
And a mouth

 

[Brismail]

I think the lines for this shoulders need to be brought down abit more. because he/she looks too muscley for just a normally bystander.


EDIT: http://i161.photobucket.com/albums/t231 ... il/man.png[/img]
a bit like this maybe?

 

[Swordhunter]

Thank for you'r opinions, I brought the shoulders on the first the thirth frames a little bit down:
http://img258.imageshack.us/img258/2632/westernvm7.png[/img]

 

[Brismail]

cool, looks better already.

 

[reasonbackkid]

It is cute,

Have you tried puttin a hair on it?  DOes it look cool? Well,  I remember before i make my character template, I draw the frontview first then add  hair+ clothes on it and criticize it myself... After you realize that your work looks cool with clothes, then you do the walking animation.

 

[Swordhunter]

I gave it a try:
http://img254.imageshack.us/img254/6117/aceui5.png[/imgZOOM]
It supposed to be the main character of my game :S
Yeah I know, I suck at choosing a pallete

 

[Despain]

please use the imgzoom tag when posting pixel art. it makes it much easier to critique.

 

[Swordhunter]

Cool, I didn't know there is somthing like this O:

 

[Deranous]

It looks good, it would fit well in a kinda dark or gothic game.

The only bit i dont like is the tiny stubs for feet.

Oh, and the skin color needs fixing. He looks kinda like a deserty person to me with that skin.

 

[Pink Wabbit]

It looks so cute! I really like it. And I agree with Deranous, you have to change the skin pallette (I think it has to look a bit pinker)

 

[Swordhunter]

@Deranous: What you mean by "tiny stabs"?
@Pink Wabbit: After I'll finish the template I will do differeny recolors for different game styles. As for now this is the basic pallet because I found out the the RTP skin pallet make it look really bad :\

 

[YoungBlaze]

look cool i think the eyes could be a lil more together but other wise it look good :thumb:

 

[Swordhunter]

^ It looks strange if the eyes are closer even by pixel xD

I started working on a side view and it seems kind'a thinner then the front view :\
http://img381.imageshack.us/img381/1296/sidevp1.png[/imgzoom]

 

[Pink Wabbit]

Really nice Swordhunter, but the think the head should be less rounder.

 

[Sonata]

Your biggest problem is the feet, right now you have none. Take a look at the Half-Kaizer template for some reference on how to do good feet.

 

[moog]

Your biggest problem is the feet, right now you have none. Take a look at the Half-Kaizer template for some reference on how to do good feet.

I thought the same, but perhaps thats the style of the sprite? Im unsure.