Need opinions on this music...

[deriru]

I was bored and I tried to make a music for my game...  :smile:

I just want to know if it fits to be a title BGM...  :neutral:

Anyways here's the link:
http://www.freewebs.com/rirade-sfoa/sfoa_title.MID

Edit: Uhm... Could someone move this to Resource Analysis? I just read the rules after posting... I was confused at first... Eh... Sorry...