need help with my story/ plot for an rpg game im working on

[stryderblaze]

Here's my story i just need someone to help me make it a good one but i still going to do the writing of course.

Story:

The first part of my game will take place 100 years ago in the year 2038 where a spellcaster casted a spell to release his master known as the Dark General from the pits of Darkness where he was imprisoned at. Now that he’s back he can wreck havoc on the world once more with his dark army. Now the question is where Stryder blaze went. Who will be able to stop this dark general from plunging the world into everlasting darkness. Who is the hero going to be to rid this world of evil beings.

The plot for the first part of my game will take place where the spellcaster casts a spell to release his master from his imprisonment in the pits of darkness. The hero’s will come later in the game .

 

[Calibre]

Well I'll just set you off with a few questions about your story that should allow you to build on it, and get a better idea of what your story is and where it is going...

The Dark General

Why was he imprisoned in the first place and by who, and how? What is his motivation to wreck havoc on the world. I'd also consider giving an original name to him, as the Dark General sounds pretty run of the mill and cliche.

The Spell Caster

What is his motivation to release the general, other than he is his master. It also helps to come up with a reason for why magic is possible, this can be anything you want but in my opinion it does help to have a backstory to it. Like in Final Fantasy 7 it was from materia they could use magic, and materia played a big part in the storyline.

...and who is Stryderblaze?

 

[Daniel]

...and who is Stryderblaze?

Probably the main character. Why do people always swap out I's for Y's and think it makes the name cool?

 

[stryderblaze]

The Dark General
if your wondering why he was imprisoned in the first place is because he destroyed six continents on the other side of the planet nia in whic the king told him not to destroy the other continents but he went ahead and did it with the help of an spellcaster

The Spell Caster
his motivation is to help the dark genral escape his imprisonment so the dark general could set off on a new plan of taking control of planet nia by conquer an destroy anyone who gets in his way no matter if your your royalty or not ans so the spellcaster casted a forbiiden spell to bring forth an army from from the very pits of darkness there known as unholy soldiers of the dark or dark soldiers for short

Stryderblaze somewhat between main hero and an npc and stryderblaze had no option left but to imprison the dark general into the pits of darkness within a unholy crystal along with his dark army with a forbiidden sealing spell.

Magic:
magic is possible through the use of crystals that give or have magical powers within them.

well that should be better im currently working on the CMS for my game