My very first try at music

[gRaViJa]

i'm only posting this to get some critique and help on how to improve. i just got Noteworthy and i tried to make something for the typical starting village. I hope someone can say how i can improve

(btw, it's even only a part of a song )

 

[jakeychan]

Its not too bad, maybe use more notes, it gets a little repetitive and make sure you make it so that when the song loops it flows together.

 

[gRaViJa]

ok, i will keep that in mind, i was also thinking it was getting a little repetitive, ill try to make the 2nd part a little more original