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In my opinon, by better one:
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~R~

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RomanMelnik, the green guy with cape wears gozasu's child hat and the clothes are an rtp recolor, but thanks for remember to credits
 
I like the Johnny Frankenstein and the straw battle-dummy! Very cute.

Only criticisms I can key in on are:
  • The Zombie's outreached arm-- is it broken? Because it's too long and floppy-looking. Consider straightening it or putting it at a different angle. It's hard to make gestures with RTP sprites because you have so few pixels to mess with, and even one pixel off makes a big diff.
  • The laying-down farmer needs more perspective-- it looks like he's laying perfectly on his arm. Consider making the up-facing side shorter by a pixel's length or two to force perspective.
  • The grey-haired pope guy is lacking contrast. His outlines/shadows are black while the rest of him registers at a very high lightness/saturation. Deepen the color contrast or lighten that heavy black color.
A big thumbs-up on everything else! :thumb:
 

Oburi

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I think they arent really bad, but why do you show them to us, when u think by yourself, that they are to bad?
But I really like the priestlike dude at the end...
 

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