My Titlescreens

[Malachi]

Title screens for a future project:

Spoiler

http://img518.imageshack.us/img518/9818/35375988vo3.png[/img]
http://img81.imageshack.us/img81/552/30748065oz5.png[/img]
http://img523.imageshack.us/img523/1153/41010222jb8.png[/img]

Any critique?

 

[Rye]

Umm, have more originality than using screens from an anime? :\ nothing to critique, really. Oh
wait, are you making a fangame? Maybe you should mention that. STILL, nothing to critique except it's stupid how the image changes supposedly when you choose new game or continue.

 

[cactus]

i love claymore... but doesn't it have a y in it?

 

[Malachi]

Yes it does....DAMMIT!

 

[Skyla Doragono]

Nice spelling mistake.

But, yeah. Just taking a frame shot and slapping some bars and a title on it... just no.

Now if you took a screenshot, added some nice Photoshop effects, and generally made it spiffy, that would be great.

Or better yet, hire an artist. That'd be phenomenal.

 

[munin]

What Rye said. Are you making a fangame? Otherwise I see it as a cheap way out to use anime scenes for your titlescreens.

 

[Malachi]

@Atemu:
I did add effects....
@Munin:
Yes it is going to be a fan game...once AWD is finished.

 

[Skyla Doragono]

Black bars =/= effects, dear.

 

[Malachi]

You'd best stop making those bad judgments. I remastered the images as well as gave them other effects. Tch >>>

 

[Skyla Doragono]

Right. Proof plz; because other than your word, there's no way to tell the difference between your titles and unedited screen captures.

 

[arctrooper48]

Drama! What is going on at rmxp.org...

 

[Kraft]

Heh... I just laughs at you guys fighting ^_^

Anyways, yeah, one thing that I would lose is the fact that it changes pictures when you change from New Game to Continue and to Exit game...

They look good... But I would like to see the original pictures to see what you actually did to them...

They look good because they look like they were made like that by the Anime creators...

~Kraft

 

[Malachi]

Ok then. I'll edit this post with the originals.

 

[Rye]

Really, if it's fangame for claymore, why should he have to do OMG SPECIAL EFFECTS?! !!! and OMG ORiGINALITY!!! The only thing really really wrong with his title stuff is the image completely changes when you go from New game to Continue. In the same sense, since it should not be wrong for him to use a screenshot from the anime for a fangame in a title screen, there is very very very little to critique besides: "Hey how does this look even though I opted for a boring, more safe choice in title screens?"

:\ So, really, Malick, if you don't want to make another one, then don't. There isn't MUCH wrong with it, as long as the game is actually Claymore or whatnot.