My Title Screen

[syphonmax]

This is the title screen for my game

[UPDATE]
Ok I have updated it again

http://i159.photobucket.com/albums/t133 ... within.png[/IMG]

The one in the spoiler below is the picture before the new update!

Spoiler

http://i159.photobucket.com/albums/t133/syphonmax/UltimateBattle-1.png[/IMG]

The one in the spoiler below is the original!

Spoiler

http://i159.photobucket.com/albums/t133/syphonmax/UltimateBattle.png[/IMG]

C&C please

 

[HarryE]

Wow... THat's really cool. You might consider darkening the sillouettes a bit.

And also, are you sure about that Title?

 

[Hevendor]

And also, are you sure about that Title?

I'd comment, but can't even read it.

 

[crispychaney]

ditto wither hevendor, i cant read the text either although i do like how it looks so far with the bg

 

[syphonmax]

Really you can't read it

Ok I'll see what I can do

 

[HarryE]

It's called "The Ultimate Battle"

Oh dear...

 

[syphonmax]

Hey I am still working on the title name so I will call it that temporary

 

[HarryE]

Hey I am still working on the title name so I will call it that temporary

Okay fair enough. Just try to not use the word "Ultimate" in the title. Seems a bit corny, really.

I'm liking the screen so far, though. It's got a really good, scary, musty feel to it.

 

[syphonmax]

Yep the exact feel I wanted

 

[Reives]

I really like the effect you're trying to go for here, but as others mentioned it is rather dark. D: I had to manually turn my monitor's contrast to max to read the text.

I think (not sure though) that the shadows, if given a bit more of a dark red tint to the black (currently seems a bit green to me for some reason) might work better, by the way. :>

 

[busbuzz]

Add contraast, give the title a lighter red, to make it readable

 

[syphonmax]

UPDATED

Go and check it out on the first post

 

[busbuzz]

Better

 

[regi]

Still needs a bit of contrast, it might just be my computer screen but it's hard to make out the foreground (I can see the sky pretty clearly, kudos to that part, but everything in front of it is hard to see).

 

[NexS]

i dunno about the picture... lol but sorry, but the name scream "LAME" at me... good quality, made me laugh :D

 

[bojox3m]

i love the title. it seems very action pack XD

 

[syphonmax]

lol

Yeah but that's just a temporary title until I actually think of one

so far I have got more than 100 different title names in my head I just have to pick one

 

[Hevendor]

As long as they're better than 'The Ultimate Battle'...

The title screen's much better now, but like Regimos said, it's a bit hard to see what's happening in the foreground. Good job so far though

 

[syphonmax]

OK Finally I added contrast and all the other stuff

but best of all I thought up a new title name :D

http://i159.photobucket.com/albums/t133 ... within.png[/IMG]

 

[munin]

Hey, I'm really digging your updated titlescreen. It makes me think of a really intense comic / graphic novel. Which is a good thing because I'm a geeky lover of graphic novels.