My third try at music... Am I getting better?

[Murcu]

Here it is folks, my third and obviously HIGHLY anticipated third try. I know, I know, it's exciting, but try to keep your pants clean.

Oh, and tell me what you think.

ZUHBANG!

Here's my Second Try

No, I'm not going to show you the first try. Mostly because I'm too lazy to go rooting through the forum looking for it, but also because I'm lazy. :D

 

[sixdd]

They both sound pretty good, the first song is a little better in my opinion, but from a musical point of view they both sound like good starting points.

Pointers: On the first song at 26 seconds, where the flute? goes higher and then back down, you may try using a different note than the one you just played. Try it and see if you like it, just a suggestion though.

Hope that makes sense.