My newest title screen! C&C plz

[dylanf3]

*I made this one for my game, which also had a complete restyle (a complete new and better looking project xD)
C&C on this one plz, i think it looks WAAAAAAAAAY better then the previous one!

 

[Calibre]

Looks okat but there isn't too much to comment on really. why is there sort of arabic with the word productions keep popping up? and I guess the only thing to say is, is it relevant to your game in both mood and theme.

 

[Nachos]

err, i cant see the pic. have you changed something?

:crazy:

 

[dylanf3]

I changed the link so its visible...
@calibre >>> that's elvish

 

[candle]

FYI, elvish is not cool because most people can't read it easily. Other than that, not much to comment on.

 

[dylanf3]

its not meant to be read, that's why i put it there!!!!

 

[candle]

That doesn't make sense. Why add text if it is not meant to be read? That's like putting a picture of a rose when it's about Final Fantasy.

 

[LegacyCrono]

That doesn't make sense. Why add text if it is not meant to be read?

Specially when it's huge and is poking your eyes with contrasting colors! :blank:

I'm sorry, but it's a crappy title screen. It's boring. It's poorly made on (probably) Photoshop. Has no graphical appeal. The colors used on the text are too bright considering the dark colors used on the background. Elvish scripting is overrated.


Think on the title screen as your box art. It must have appeal to sell what you've made. I wouldn't buy your game if I saw that title screen as a box art on the store shelf.

My tip: try again.
SEE YA!!!!!