My new title screen

[Walid Elhertani]

Here is my new title screen what do ya think:
http://img451.imageshack.us/img451/3045/ptlotak9.png[/IMG]

 

[Tana]

for starters, the white border around the text and characters should really be cleaned up.
Also, the blue glittery stuff I'd expect it to continue down into the picture, not just around the title.

 

[brainstorm]

The Renders need to be cleaned up. And I think the background needs color.

 

[Walid Elhertani]

thanks for the advice
BTW keep this thread open so i can post my revised one

For the record, threads aren't closed in analysis unless they're requested to be closed, or they break a rule of the forum. -Tana

 

[Kraft]

did you make it?
looks okay if you did, apart from those things mentioned above, the pokemon, well, to my artists eye, the pokemon look too similiar for my personal liking. By this I mean that they look too similiar in the form that you have them (side by side) and the dotted border around the pokemon themselves looks bad, I am not sure what it is supposed to be, but if the pokemon are supposed to be glowing, then I would suggest a glow, not a kinda rose petal thingy. it also looks like you tryed to give them a light shadow (light meaning white) that looks kinda out of place.

also, the theme of your title...
if I were to look at the background (just the background) I would think that the theme would be dark, but not evil, and very cave-like. I would not suggest it in a title screen. also, a tip for improving the background would be to mix it up a little, you know, that background looks like a small pic repeated a lot of times.
and then the pokemon themselves look cheerful (for the most part), light and good, which contrasts to the background.

I hope this post does not sound like I am critisizing the whole thing, I am not meaning to, I am merely suggesting several things that could be improved.
(constructive criticism)

Kraft

 

[Siege]

The detailed background really clashes with the simplicity of the "Pokemon" text and the pokemon themselves. The "white dot things" really don't look good as previously mentioned i suggest you take them away.

 

[ArcanaMagek]

Well i think its great!!

 

[~Atlaswing~]

So you ripped the 3 legendaries in POkemon Pearl and Diamond eh?

Remove the white dots around the images. In photoshop, use the wand tool, right click, color range, click on one of the whites, and adjust the Fuzziness to 200... Then OK.. Then press delete.. It will remove the dots instantly. Well, you may have to do it 3x though..

 

[Kraft]

or just be good (and patient) with the eraser tool.