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My main hero's face graphic

NexS

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that is very nice... i like it, nice and simple
the shading on the collar on the left hand side is a bit dodgy
 

Rye

Member

To be honest, I've never liked the really thick lineart. In some places as well it looks like your hand became too shakey. You should smooth the lines out a bit more and it would look more professional. Otherwise, it's pretty cute. XD I love the emotions in your avatar.
 
Your avatar is hilarious, and the expressions were done very well.

I agree with Rye, smooth out some of the outline some, but I don't mind thick lineart at all. It'll make a statement definately.
 
thanks too all of you :)

crazymew- I used photoshop for my facegraphics :D

Lene & Rye - Have the lines are too thick in some places and the shading is kinda all over the place. Now that i finished with most of my expressions i'm going to go back and fix these things. should take a lot less time just fix it up then to do a whole new one.

Thanks to everyone for the help :)
 

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