My first Title Screen

[Ufalama123]

What you think about my first Title Screen?
I use it for my new project called Nightmare Sword!
(Note: I have finally got time to buy RPG Maker XP!)

Spoiler: Take a look at this!

http://img264.imageshack.us/img264/6096/darkswordtitlebt8.jpg[/imgzoom]
I know it is hard too see font! Dumb paint saved it as JPG!

So, do you like it?
Please reply if it needs work!

EDIT: Ok people! Here is the new one! I did remember to save as PNG now!

Spoiler: Hope you like the new one!

http://img339.imageshack.us/img339/8928/darkswordtitleud4.png[/imgzoom]

 

[Zethus]

you can choose to save it as something else then JPG on paint...

 

[Stupid Penguin]

you can choose to save it as something else then JPG on paint...

That.

Also, maybe you should make the font a lighter color as well.
It's good so far though.

 

[Jeronimus]

The text is not illegible because you saved as a jpg, but because its colour is too close to the color of the background picture (Dark blue on black on dark blue sky?). Make the contrast between them larger (by, e.g. a lighter colour for the title)
While there is technically nothing wrong with paint for the most basic things possible, this is something that could benefit from slightly better software.

 

[Ufalama123]

you can choose to save it as something else then JPG on paint...

I know! I did just forgot to choose what to save it as!
And people! Look at the new one! I followed the tips!