My first title/gameover

[Oblivion3794]

This is my first gameover can anyone help me make it better, please

Spoiler

http://i186.photobucket.com/albums/x21/mcoluzzi/Gameover.jpg[/img]

Thanks

 

[Grathea]

OK, let's work on this.
What is your game about? That should have some showing in the gameover.
As it is, it seems your game is about bloody handprints and weird symbols.
Until we learn what the game's about, we can't really critique you.

 

[Oblivion3794]

well really i guess this was not so much about my game as it was a practice at making resources for the community, and ways for me to improve my work