MY First Sprite in 6-10 months [WIP]

[Marzat]

So I haven't been active within the last year, mostly because of my loss of RPG Maker XP. Well within the month I am to get it again and so I have started to make sprite again. So anyway I've lost most of my talent. So this is my first sprite to coming back so here it is.

P.S I'm going to start with little, regular stuff before I begin with harder things. Rate and comment on this and help me get back to how I used to be able to do spites. XD

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[Numb]

It looks unnatural - The pants are realllly boxey. I would make it look more natural. And something about ti looks really weird o.O. Maybe if you just added hair?

 

[Marzat]

I edited and updated with a remodeled sprite.

 

[Marzat]

New Edits.

 

[Tindy]

Those are some crazy thunderthighs that guy has going on. Instead of adding an extra line, just try shading it differently.

 

[Numb]

It looks like he shoved pillows into his pants. it's very disturbing o.o!

 

[ZephyrSkye]

Desaturate and lessen the contrast a bit. It will help with the bulbous look. Do that and see how it looks.