My first HK try

[Shifter FP]

Hello everybody ^^
Im new and im from germany so, sry for my bad english
I wanna show you my try to make a HK and i dont think he is realy bad...The hair from the side is the thing on him i hate the most...
Okey i show u now ^^
give critics
http://img3.imagebanana.com/view/64rz33n5/ManArmy.png

 

[Danny]

Nice attempt, you have the lines just about right anyway. The sprite reminds me of JD Slasha's HK style, but it's not aswell executed. You've pin pointed a ligth source well enough, but you've focused the highlights all down one side, not good. Try adding a little more detail through shading, if there's a bit more contrast in your pallette, and the colours are distributed evenly, there should be a good improvement. Think where folds would be, make those areas dark, and then think where highlights would be due to this. A good idea would also be to use darker colours of the the pallette to define a chest area.

 

[Taylor]

It's pretty good, I think the outline of where hair meets the head should be lighter though, because it seems like he's just wearing it.

 

[AuraOfWind]

Nice one for a first timer xD

 

[Shifter FP]

Ty u all for your comments ^^

I will use Hydrolics tipps for my next one ^^

If he is finished i will post him here to ^^

Greetz
Shifter :wink:

 

[busbuzz]

Hey can i post an edited version for VX? im gathering HK stuff of course all credits for you and not for me

 

[dadevvtsvre]

It looks really good. I dunno why, though, but on the side views it looks like his hair is sort of...glued on. Anyway, it's pretty good for a first time.