My first Half-Kaiser character (it sucks a lot)

[D3SDRUB4L]

My first Half Kaiser character...

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Sucks a lot, but, as I said, it's the first...

Now, I'm working on this one:

http://img243.imageshack.us/my.php?imag ... wipyu9.png[/IMG]

 

[Ellie]

Is there any shading at all there?

 

[Cortez]

Don't start another until you complete the first one!

Its a decent start, but its terribly incomplete. You need to shade it, but even before then, there are nots of problems. The big one is the straight lines (example: the hat and the bottom of the shit). Curve them with the body to make it more realistic.

It really looks like you just took two minutes and slapped some quick colors on top of the template. Don't be so sloppy if you want to take this seriously and produce some good results.

 

[Tohsaka]

Looks like you used the line tool. I would suggest zooming in and doing it per pixel, and shading it. It takes more time, but gives a better result.

BTW, don't pillow shade.

 

[Cortez]

He didn't pillow shade; he didn't shade at all.

 

[Mac]

Ok here we go:-

1. He hasn't been shaded at all.
2. The colour is too bright de-saturate it.
3. The hat isn't rounded properly...it looks odd.
4. Where is waist and a t-shirt is, its unnaturally curved.
5. The shoes on the front view are out of perspective compared the rest...they are too far out.

That abouts covers it.

Good luck!