My First Battler - WIP!

[Lost_in_Exsistance]

Hello everyone,
i decided to try making my very own side view battler, and yeah i know, it's not that great, and not nearly complete, but i just want to know what you guys think of it so far, the one frame.

the template is from nazra7
and all the graphics (colors and clothes and sword, hair, everything..) is all done by me.

I updated, Now i have another guy, the green haired guy. the only thing not done completely by me is the sword, it's a redone version of a dollmage sword, i curved it and added the top spike and recolored it.

http://img383.imageshack.us/img383/9868/togethernewzw3.png[/img]
http://img383.imageshack.us/img383/7854/togethernew2la8.png[/img]

please tell me what you think
thanks.

 

[Xaixis]

I like the style of it.

Try working on the 'X's on his pants. On the leg that is sticking out, it seems as an x was just drawn on his leg, ignoring the bend of the leg. If you make that small change then I think it should be good.

Good luck!

 

[Lost_in_Exsistance]

Thank you, I'll work on the X in a little while.

 

[Macro]

Would you mind sending me the template you used. I'd like to try ym hand at one of these for my character scruffy.

 

[Lost_in_Exsistance]

here you go, it's on this thread.
http://www.rmxp.org/forums/index.php?topic=42976.0

 

[Chalupa]

I'm no spriter, but I think his hair could use a little work.

 

[Lost_in_Exsistance]

yeah thanks, it does look a little flat lol

 

[Lost_in_Exsistance]

*Bump* I lost my black haired battler, my computer took a shit so i made myself a new computer lol lots of money gone... but anyway since its a new computer i decided i should start a different NEW battler, i think i did better this time around.

please tell me what you think of the new one.. and the old one in case i decide to remake the frames i lost..

thanks.