My first attept at a game(tech demo)

[ninjutsuwarrior]

The link to my game is here  http://www.mediafire.com/?y53taomydvr

and another one which may have some glitches here  http://www.mediafire.com/?dolydizyntj

But no major life changing computer destroying glitches...


Story Backround

It all started 102 years ago during the era known as the Unknown Reason. Gods and Humans lived in peace and harmony on the world of Aluzeres. During these times monsters weren’t able to roam free because of the God’s Special Defense Force who kept them in check. Because of this Humans lead a peaceful life and all was good….Until that one day…. During the Festival of Forceistus a feat that’s reason is still unknown today was preformed. Somehow a human was able to get to the Realm of Odin and kill a God…. And that’s where it all began…
Angered, the God’s punished an entire nation the Proclamation of Lacrene. The nation, furious at the nerve of the Gods protested but were ultimately unable to anything.  This nation soon became wielder of the most unlawful city in Aluzeres: Jotunheim. Peace lasted for a long time but, eventually another person was killed…this time a Human. An innocent child and by a God! Soon all of Aluzeres was aware and the Gods decided to remove the Proclamation from effect. But, very soon after, a man from Jotunheim and a God got into an argument over something no one knows about and the God killed him… Very quickly the already weak relations were shattered and war broke out.
The war lasted for 7 years and eventually the Gods took control of all of Aluzeres… The Gods took advantage of their new positions and the Government became corrupt…. You play the role of two boys on different sides of the world. One who’s out for revenge and one who wants to end the Gods reign. During the Demo you play through a very small part of one boy’s campaign.









Character Profiles

Seth  –  The boy out to end the Gods reign. He was part of an underground thieves’ guild. Trained in the arts of the thief he is a master lock pick and is very quick on his feet. When his family was killed in a raid of the guild and he was thrown into the streets he chose to end their reign and the suffering…
Zeik – A person who’s reasons to join and betray the Army of the Gods is unknown. Regardless he help’s Seth throughout his journey…
Axel  –  A boy who has no past. He was found wandering through a forest with a cat on his head and was taken in by the town of Tenil. He grew up there for 14 years and is now 17. A raid of his village, a sword flying from the sky, and the death of his best friend’s father lead him to go for revenge and his own curiosity forces him to wonder what really caused this war…
Laura  – Axel’s best friend. Dream’s that started happening after the sword fell from the sky sparked a flame in his character and made Axel wonder what is this war really… She accompanies Axel during his journey to help her avenge her father and get answers...
Nero  – The cat who was found with Axel and his other best friend. He really isn’t a cat and bears a seal on his back that actually means that he is a Drago-cat or a cat that grows wings, can speak, and can learn magic… He has helped Axel get through some harsh times.

Screens

First download


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Second download

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Try them please they're relativly short tech demo things...

 

[Phoenix]

Everything is FAR too symmetrical.

And I can barely read your synopsis.

Fix up your grammar, and make improvements to the thread, then put some more thought into the game.

 

[boon]

You should Glam up your topic with character images, game logo?

The world is perfectly symetrical, it's very creepy.

Also:

Spoiler

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How does the poor guy make contact with the outside world, being walled in?

 

[ninjutsuwarrior]

Sorry about the symmetricalness but I thought my story overview was pretty good...
I don't understand how you cant read it??

and the guy could like use magic to teleport out.

And like the topic says its my first try.

 

[Devon Jacobs]

Definately need to move things around randomly.

 

[ninjutsuwarrior]

I'll re map some things but at least try the game even if the mapping is bad.

 

[Gray]

Ok , I tried the game. The mapping isn't really that bad , but the intro was so boring....
With all the sentances with the endings like this.....
It can get really annoying...

When I got up to the first fight , I just immediatley quit.
Your database needs tweaked.... alot.

Since I quit early , I can't really say more. 2/5

 

[Necrile]

I don't know about you guys, but the combination of my first attempt and the misspelling of attempt always shoots up a red flag for good gaming. Anywho, played the demo, quit at the first fight...and I know it has been said many times, but... fix your mapping and your story. Nothing original here.
3/10

 

[Mustardy85]

Everything is FAR too symmetrical.

And I can barely read your synopsis.

Fix up your grammar, and make improvements to the thread, then put some more thought into the game.

Lol, I was going to say the EXACT Same thing about the part about the story!