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My Best Title Screen

Not bad. There are a few spots that seem a little odd, but nothing that I would see that would deter anyone from using this. Also, great idea distributing template files, as that'll make it a lot easier for people to use it.
 
second_crimson":1mgvakc6 said:
Not bad. There are a few spots that seem a little odd, but nothing that I would see that would deter anyone from using this. Also, great idea distributing template files, as that'll make it a lot easier for people to use it.

Beats me looks nice on my end (1440x900 resolution).

Oh and ya I thought it made sense to add editable files because I hated it when people made a title screen and it said: "Your text" but there was no way to get ride of the text with out messing up the image.
 
Okay, here's an image to show what stood out to me:
http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b391/ ... itique.png[/img]
The spots circled in red just popped out because they just didn't mesh with the design. Most of these are only a few pixels, so they can be remedied by just zooming in and trying to get their colour more similar to the surrounding colours. The one circled twice is the one that immediately popped out at me. I think it wouldn't be so bad if it had more strands coming from it.

I circled that one spot in orange because...well I don't really know what to make of this. It seems like you have a snowman effect going on here. I think if the two circles were just a touch closer together it wouldn't seem like they're stacked on each other, and it'd seem more like they're melding together.

Now I don't know what technique you used, so this could've very well been a side effect of whatever you used. Plus this is just my opinion, none of these things really ruin the screen, I'm just looking for ways to help you improve this.
 
It was a side effect (the small dots). The large opening...or snowm man was done as is for no reason. But in any case I still like it.
 
I can download programs that will generate similar patterns at the click of a button, so I'm going to be a buttmunch and assume that that's what you've done here. Furthermore, your best title screen is on par with my worst tie-dye t-shirt.  :-\
 
Can't please evreyone and I can live with that. And I used a cloud effect in the background...though you can't see it that well.
 
Yeah, I still haven't got the brightness/contrast on my new LCD monitor quite right, so I don't pick up subtle patterns as well as I'd like to. I do like that this looks like an electrified snowman, though.
 
This links is die.
Sound that good [Can fix files .psd]:D.
Can you reupload there files?Please......ple....
There files are
nice?
many?

Sorry I'm from vietnamseme .if wrong this post I'm very sorry:D
 

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