My battlers (Iceaxe's style)

[edueleno]

EDITED
Well, here are two battlers that I've made. On the next messages you could see the old battler. The newone is better, and have other colors.

Main Character
http://img509.imageshack.us/img509/196/ ... ajenb9.png[/img]

Dylan
http://img501.imageshack.us/img501/8091 ... eropg8.png[/img]

Thank you!
See you!

 

[Mac]

Its nice, but is he supposed to be so small?...he resembles a midget because he is out of proportion, but if thats the style your going for then you did a good job ^_^

Its mainly his legs that cause the problem.

 

[edueleno]

yes, i see it now.
But i think the head is big, too.
If you look between the red jumper (jumper? i mean... coat or something like that...) there's the dark blue of the trousers, not the grey of the t-shirt...

Here's the same image a bit... deformed... JAJAJA
http://img182.imageshack.us/img182/6793 ... ajezr8.png[/img]
I lighted a bit the dark blue, and corrected one of the legs.
The head is smaller now, but all this is with Photoshop. In this days i'll draw it again, i think...

See you!

EDIT: The sword is wrong, too. Now I see it. It's difficult to explain in English, but you'll see it on the next battler ^^

 

[Spiritual]

Try making the legs longer. The stomach shouldn't be longer than the legs. Either that or make the stomach smaller.

 

[edueleno]

Well, I made another battler -is the same, but i've done it again-.
Now i see it better... JA!
Thank you two for telling me what to correct.

http://img525.imageshack.us/img525/6558 ... ajezx9.png[/img]

See you!

 

[Halestorm5]

The new one looks amazing... But his sword is well... Compare it to the reference XD

Its short.

 

[edueleno]

Yes, I know. But I wanted to do it shorter... first, because of the proportions.
JAJAJA
I mean, the sword is different...

Thank you!
See you!

EDIT:
The latest (and definelity, I hope) battler, with a few corrections-:
http://img501.imageshack.us/img501/8715 ... ajexl4.png[/img]
I'm using it in the game. Je!

 

[edueleno]

I've edited the battler completely. Now have other possition, other colors. I think is better.
Here's it:
http://img509.imageshack.us/img509/196/ ... ajenb9.png[/img]

And I've done another battler, it's in the firt message.

See you!

 

[Atnas]

Wow, this is a lot better than the others.

Keep up the good work.

 

[MistTribe]

Yeah see other people can give helpful critisism :D (I know I spelled that wrong but whatever Im too tired to think) Oh and May I ask if tis is for your game? They look awesome.

 

[coyotecraft]

I like the first two. Dylan's face could look better if his nose was more pointed.

 

[edueleno]

Wow, this is a lot better than the others.

Keep up the good work.

I'm thinking of start doing battlers only for draw... (and then their characters)
Perhaps...

Yeah see other people can give helpful critisism :D (I know I spelled that wrong but whatever Im too tired to think) Oh and May I ask if tis is for your game? They look awesome.

Of course, if they hadn't given me advices, I wouldn't have changed the battler...!

Yes, they're for my game. I'm remaking Crimson Lotus' battlers, but I'm changing them a lot...

I like the first two. Dylan's face could look better if his nose was more pointed.

I'm already working on it... I'll correct the nose.



Thank you!!