My 3 new Titlescreens (TSK 1 & 2 & Creation of Planets)

[RPGS]

Here is a titlescreen (It is of the magic cosmos within Ameth : Creation of Planets) that I´ve done. I really like it, except that it may be darker !

And this is another Titlescreen, that will be my next RPG after creation of Planets :

Personaly I like the TSK Titles better than the first, BUT I HAVE FOUND IT ON GOOGLE AND EDIT IT WITH COLORS

I know you don´t think that I´ve done TSK Title myself, but I HAVE :

Please be aware that TSK 1 & 2 TITLES IS FOUND ON GOOGLE AND I HAVE JUST EDITED THEM ALOT WITH COLORS AND SHADOWS !!!

Please enjoy and comment ^_^

 

[Desecration]

I like the way you've said you have done this, when by the size its clearly just an imagine with some text you've added. That being said so are a lot of title screens.. Either way, the text is very, very hard to read and the image seems very low quality. You may want to use a higher quality image for your title screen also unless you're not using the default RMXP sizes this is far too big for a title screen. As for the off-topic spoiler, what the hell? What does that have to do with anything...?

 

[RPGS]

Okey 1st , I HAVE DONE THIS MYSELF !!! can you do anybetter please PM me !

And 2nd I noticed it was to big bt The new one is NOT PNG !
And it is hard to read THAT´S WHAT IT WAS MEANT TO BE (Strange I know, bt)

And also I was only WONDERING at the off-topic spoiler, you should say something on MY title, as I have done that myself , or don´t you like it, that would be something else :X

 

[Kraft]

Here is a good rule of thumb for things like this... Squint at it. Can you read the text? Does the whole thing appear to be the same or almost same color? If so, then something needs to be changed! ^_^ There is a thing in the graphic design world celled Contrast. Meaning, that differences in color make things stand out. Things, like your main title should stand out, both to draw the audience to that part of the image, which is the most important, but to also provide a balance to the while image.

 

[RPGS]

Of course I will change hue (contrast), butn what I mean is that colors shouldn´t be changed except for that you can read the text, sorry for that, will be fixed :X

 

[Kraft]

2 things about your post right before mine... one, why would you make the most important part of a TITLE screen... hard to see or in this case read?

And the second, which (lol) I am surprised I did not see the first time I read it... is thats a pretty bold statement you made there...

"can you do any better please PM me!"

Haha! Hell yes I can! What, you want me to PM you and let you know that in person?

 

[RPGS]

Ok, post it (just interested and curios u know) But I will fix it,but part of the meaning is that it shall be dimmed like that, tghis is a horror game , anymore ?

 

[RPGS]

Sorry if double post, UPDATE : TSK title II finished, If you want to see it wait some days...

 

[blakependragon]

why in the world are you posting this if you just attack everyone that gives advice? p.s. this category is "Visual Art Analysis"
and why bother bumping it for that matter? do you want praise; wow, that's the best title i've ever seen!

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well, your image looks good to me, but the text is cheap. and i know, you said it's supposed to be hard to read. that means you want a special/certain idea to be portrayed. it may be a good idea to you, but no matter how we 'think' it should be, if it is hard to read, it doesn't serve its purpose. :shock:

 

[RPGS]

Sorry, and I wasn´t attacking anyone, but saying that the image SHALL be dimmy, thank you and sorry if it sounded like that, everyone sorry

 

[blakependragon]

:grin: you appeared extremeley deffensive, but ah well
:tongue: i'm bored, i played around with it. of course the planets can be put anywhere, and different sizes

 

[RPGS]

I am very sorry, but there shall be no planets at the title screen because of :

1.It is not real planets, but virtual planets being created
2.It is no perfect planets and that text make me think of Cartoon

I would use it anyhow, IF my game shouldn´t be a horror/Sci-Fi game, thanks anyhow ^_^

Ps.It is not standing "Creation" but Creaton

 

[RPGS]

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[SephirothSpawn]

DO NOT BUMP ANALYSIS THREADS.

ENOUGH WITH THE PROJECT ADVERTISEMENTS IN EVERY POST YOU MAKE. IT'S GETTING SILLY.

Thank you

 

[RPGS]

I know I will delete it, Also, I did that now I have a signature sorry

Plz comment, what about the story of TSK ?

 

[SephirothSpawn]

Post content is different then a signature. It's fine to advertise in your signature, but most post include some attention whorish behavior that really only gives you a negative reflection of what you are doing.

This thread is for visual art analysis. Not story. Please remove anything that is not related to the title scene graphics.

 

[RPGS]

I am sorry but the little storylines does not hurt do they ? It is The Titescreen I wanna have comments on though :X

 

[Gulch666]

i dunno why but these make me think google image search, slap text on them.

i really dont think that the images used for the background look like they were meant to be that size.

TSK looks like its stretched

 

[RPGS]

No No no ! I have JUST EDIT GOOGLE IMAGES , look for Photoshop it is what I have edited them in

 

[SephirothSpawn]

I am 99.9% sure I have seen one of your images before on a desktop background site. If you did it in photoshop, post a photoshop image (psd? or whatever it is) of the image. The point everyone is making, the background has layers to it. The font looks like you just used paint and just pasted text somewhere.

If you admit to it, then just change them and don't do it again. But if we find out you did just take the backgrounds, paste some text over it and claim it as you made it, then a ban/temp-ban might be in order.

You actually missed a webpage url in one of the photos you have posted as one of the title screens, but the font was to blurred to actually see what it was and check it out myself. Your TSK2 background image looks like it has one as well in the bottom right corner, but looks like you cut some of it off. Just saying... it looks suspicious.