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[Batman]

These are the first MIDI's I've ever made:

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Dark Fortress Eyes
http://www.sendspace.com/file/3v8mrb

Labyrinth
http://www.sendspace.com/file/d47r3p

Urban Empire
http://www.sendspace.com/file/tosmra

I'm not a pro at making MIDI's, but I'm just wondering if I should continue doing it, maybe I'll get better? Give me some feedback

Much appreciated.

-Swick

 

[Showkaizer]

I'm not much into Music but I suppose its not to bad for the first shot. I like the first and the last one the best. The middle one has an okay sound but the melody goes nowhere. Its like some strange midi freestyle.

While the first is good I think it was a bit halting and needed to "flow more". Maybe more instruments? I dunno.

The last one is pretty good . Reminds me of some basement computer lab mission or something , but it could use some more variety. it sounds like a rap instrumental loop lol.

 

[Sonata]

Do continue.
For the first one I would suggest adding a bass line.

 

[Shizu]

Are you sure these are your first midi's? Like, you've never made any others in your sleep or something? These are wonderful for the first go. The first one, all I can say that it needs a few notes in between to connect the melodies together, but other than that It's very good, melody-wise. throwing in a few more instruments wouldn't hurt at all!

Labyrinth is going somewhere, actually, the beginning has a great concept to it . At that point you've already got the listener's attention. The problem is that you forced the melody so much it started getting out of place. Try to relax the melody and the piano a bit, let it flow gently~

The first two I tenderly like out of personal taste and how you construct your melodies. If these are really yours, I will personally hurt you if you stop composing.

 

[Waiise]

These are great, I cannot think of anything to add except for what's already said. Keep up the magnificent work!

 

[Batman]

Thanks guys

And yes this is really my first attempt at making midis, though I am a musician when I'm not on the computer. I play many instruments, guitar being my main focus.

I will glady take all of your criticism and keep making midis!