Musashi's 123981293th Template

[Musashi]

Yes, I've made so many templates...not that I post most of them since they're crap.

Anyways, heres my newest creation-- Its untitled right now.

Regular:
http://i56.photobucket.com/albums/g182/ ... ranged.jpg[/IMG]

Mouthless:
http://i56.photobucket.com/albums/g182/ ... oMouth.jpg[/IMG]

All I need to do is finish the sideview and start working one the female version.
This is about the same size as RTP, about one or two pixels taller. I tested, and it works fine with RTP tilesets.

Right now, this is not available for projects. You can post your sprites, but you can't use it your game(not that you could even if I allowed it, its uncomplete..)

 

[bojjenclon]

so whats the point of this if people can't use it? and do you have any non-human temps?

 

[Musashi]

Umm, so I can get opinions on my work? C&C and the like..
Anyways, I stated that you can sprite on it just not use it in a project.

Thats just for now though.

 

[bojjenclon]

oh thats cool. yeah it would be good for a sportsperson or someone wearing heavy armor.

 

[Musashi]

Finished the first Side View Frame
http://i56.photobucket.com/albums/g182/ ... review.jpg[/IMG]

 

[ganonfrog]

While not exactly in my tastes, the front and back look pretty good. Although the lines around the spine of the back are a bit excessive. No one's spine is that pointy. XD Try just making it a dark area in the center.

The side view however, needs a lot of work. He's flat in the front. If he's supposed to be as muscular as it looks like you're trying to make him, his chest should have a lot more roundness than that. The shape of the head needs to be a lot more balanced as well. I also suggest moving his arms up a little closer to the front. As they are now, he would most likely fall over.

Keep it up, though. I think this could be pretty good with a bit of tweaking. Good luck.

 

[WalkingAbomination]

Aside from what Ganonfrog said i think it's looking good man, also when he takes a step he's supposed to drop a pixel instead of rising higher, bu i have not seen that in action so it could work.

 

[Musashi]

What do you mean by balancing the head? Other than that I'll try to fix the template.

 

[ganonfrog]

Make the back of it a little large and rounder, and maybe move it forward a bit. The forhead's a bit large looking too, but that might just be due to the other two things.

 

[Musashi]

I try to fix it, hows this?(Its next to the original) I also tweaked the sideview a bit(I made his chest stick out by 1 pixel, fixed his head, and made his arm closer to his torso).
http://i56.photobucket.com/albums/g182/ ... URRENT.jpg[/IMG]

 

[bojjenclon]

i like the second one

 

[Mac]

The second ones better but you need to work on that side view :P

His arms are way too far back.

 

[Musashi]

The second one being the one to the right? And I tried to fix the arms in the sideview, is was even more back before.

 

[Mac]

Yeah the right one. What i mean is because the way the joint on the shoulder is done is it deforms the character and doesn't look right.

 

[bojjenclon]

yeah the one on the right

 

[Musashi]

Ok, that makes things easier.


EDIT: I just noticed that this my first thread to pass one page of posts :D

 

[ganonfrog]

Yeah, it certainly looks much better than before. ^^ The chest could use another pixel or so, though, and the arms are still a little to far back there,*Shrugs* but it's getting there.

 

[RavenTDA]

Ooh. I like this template. It looks better without the mouth though IMO. Might want to change the black outline to something lighter. I believe most other templates use a sorta purpleish or dark brown of some sort. On the side view the arm needs to be lowered a tad and moved toward the chest more. The head is looking sorta squished and I dunno if I like the area in the back of the neck. Try working on the side view now. I think your orginal front view with the spacing in the arms is fine. When you squish it together it loses it's shape making it seem to straight. Good job. Can't wait to see a female version of this as well. Do you think you could sprite us a clothed version too, so we can see it in action?

 

[Musashi]

http://i56.photobucket.com/albums/g182/ ... RENT-1.jpg[/IMG]
Heres a preview sprite ^^

 

[Makasu]

How does it compare to the RTP? Just curious.