monster showcase

[silver wind]

EDIT: I made some more. comments & critique please?

I'm making a game about training 'pet' monsters.
could you please rate them?
Here's what I got so far:

Spoiler: panton

http://i103.photobucket.com/albums/m151/scythergirl1/rainbow/pantonsmall.png[/img]
dark type, legendary creature

Spoiler: chompil

http://i103.photobucket.com/albums/m151/scythergirl1/rainbow/chompil.png[/img]
I like this guy. it's also a dark type, and evolves into a an evil mantis, a warior ant, a honey bee, or a mechanic butterfly (see bleow).

Spoiler: phyrolf

http://i103.photobucket.com/albums/m151/scythergirl1/rainbow/phyrolfsmall.png[/img]
fire type wolfy

Spoiler: un named butterfly

http://i103.photobucket.com/albums/m151/scythergirl1/rainbow/deathskull.png[/img]
uh, well, a mechanic MOTH.

Spoiler: Ferace

http://i103.photobucket.com/albums/m151/scythergirl1/rainbow/Ferace.png[/img]
my brother says it's weird. is it?

Spoiler: metamus

http://i103.photobucket.com/albums/m151/scythergirl1/rainbow/Metamus2.png[/img]
yay for original naming.. :D

Spoiler: bulbwer

http://i103.photobucket.com/albums/m151/scythergirl1/rainbow/Bulbwer.png[/img]
simple grass type, evolves to narkistar, sleepop or a bunny (which evolves to jestare)

Spoiler: firefox (not mozzila's)

http://i103.photobucket.com/albums/m151/scythergirl1/rainbow/Deskal_Smox2.png[/img]
both evolve from Furbal(red fox in last spoiler)

Spoiler: Narkistar

http://i103.photobucket.com/albums/m151/scythergirl1/rainbow/Narcistar.png[/img]
man eating plants are cool. 'nugh said.

Spoiler: sleepop

http://i103.photobucket.com/albums/m151/scythergirl1/rainbow/sleepop.png[/img]
not a very strong monster, but it's good to have weak monsters, to balance things.

Spoiler: jestare (EVIL bunny)

http://i103.photobucket.com/albums/m151/scythergirl1/rainbow/Jestare.png[/img]

Spoiler: In-game sprites

http://i103.photobucket.com/albums/m151/scythergirl1/rainbow/My_babies_by_Yasmin11copy.png[/img]
It's old, so ignore all but the cat, fox and mouse. maybe the seel too, but it needs work.

NEW(28.02)

Spoiler: Jerboa

http://i103.photobucket.com/albums/m151/scythergirl1/rainbow/vectorjerboa_no_bg3_small.png[/img]

Spoiler: Voltine

http://i103.photobucket.com/albums/m151/scythergirl1/rainbow/voltine2.png[/img]

Spoiler: good to be bee!

http://i103.photobucket.com/albums/m151/scythergirl1/rainbow/Thoneby2.png[/img]

Spoiler: antrax..? o.o

http://i103.photobucket.com/albums/m151/scythergirl1/rainbow/ant.png[/img]

Spoiler: evil cactus guy

http://i103.photobucket.com/albums/m151/scythergirl1/rainbow/cactox.png[/img]
evolves to
http://i103.photobucket.com/albums/m151 ... actus2.png[/img]

 

[Crazetex]

That colored fox is really, really, really cute. I want one.

Jestare is sinister and creepy. Overall, good job! Some of your names need work (Phyrolf...?), but I'd like to play a game with these creatures.

 

[Despain]

They seem like they were made by two different people almost. Some of them are good- you draw four-legged animals in that pose really well- Ferace could almost be an actual pokemon design. The rest, though, really isn't that great. I'd suggest you practice a bit more with alternative poses and body types.

 

[silver wind]

you're right. I never took drawing lessons, so I struggle with poses or new body styles.
I'm teaching myself with a book. I focused on horses & dogs, so they look better than the rest.

 

[Cruelty]

chompil is way cooler than the rest of them. it's funky looking, and pretty unique. the rest look like offshoots of every-day animals, which i dont like.

 

[silver wind]

thanks ^^
I forgot to mention that the monsters are 'mutant animals' of sort. so yea, they ARE animal offshoots. look at Likity(first cat in the sprite pic)  it's a cat, but looks unique. it has flashlights as ears, cause it's an Electric type. that's what I'm aiming for: animal+type+random add-ons.

 

[Cruelty]

the blue bird looks suspiciously close to a piplup :p

 

[silver wind]

*bump*
I updated first post with new stuff.