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Monious The Lunar Dragon(RECRUITING FROM 28/9-20/10)

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Engine:RMVX
General:Traditional RPG
Length:Unknown

About:
Hello, i am Dark Santum from hbgames/rmstyle/bluesophia, i don't think these is enough information so if you need more information pls tell me. I made this game because i was inspired by Dark Gaia's game Tales Of The World but it is in RM2K3, but i think it's quality is very low so i decided to make the game in VX rather than RM2K3

Story:
Story:
In the land of Serinah, four different nations which are the:Soladian's, Omgaria, Celepathy and the Aranodon's. Each nation believed in different gods, different religions and such, but they all believe in one same thing which is Monious the Lunar dragon, Monious is the lunar dragon but nobody in the four nations ever seen Monious before. All tried to find Monious but none ever succeeds, everytime somebody went out to search for Monious they will never come back nobody knows where they have gone too but some say they got eaten by Monious when they found it, only one ever survived getting back from the trip the one who survived was named Gomez. Gomez was a great explorer he describes Monious as a little dragon but with huge power, he said that one blow of his tail could kill a hold army of soldier, nobody if it is true or not but most people believed that is is true while the rest think it is just a rumor.

Soladian's:

People who believes in the god of light Solado and the God of darkness Taguru, they believed that the two gods balances the world from good or evil. Soladian's are found commonly using spears because for them the spear is a traditional weapon for them, the Solodian Mens are great spear wielders while the womens of the Solodian are trained to heal wounded people.

Omgaria:
Omgaria is a ancient sort of nation, they only have about 1000 of them still alive walking on their feet while the rest had died due to the Oria a giant beast that roams around the part where the Omgaria lives. People think the Omgaria's is the cleverest nation among the rest because they are very good at alchemy and they are very good strategist that is the only think the other nations know but they have a precious secret that nobody knows.

Celepathy:
The nation that is known to be extinct, for about 400 years ago the Celepathy suddenly went missing ever since than the other nations thought that Celepathy was extinct until one day a man named Chigoru said that he saw a Celepathy in Orswell mountain but nobody believe him. The Celepathy was well-known for their mind reading power, al Celepathy's can mind read anyone even a monster.

Aranodon's:

Aranodon's are the most evil nation of them all, the Aranodon's are vicious hunters and warriors, if one their own people betray them even one time the Aranodon's slayers will kill the betrayal with no mercy. The Aranodon's don't like other nation touching their territory even if they touched their territory by even 1 cm the Aranodon's will start attacking the intruder with no mercy.

Characters:
Name:Tairu
Age:18
Class:Swordsman
Nation:Soladian
Weapon:Blades/Swords
Description:Tairu is the main protagonist of the game, you can describe Tairu as a kind and honest boy he always speak the truth and he never tells lies, he is also kind to the folks of his small town and his only surviving relative is his uncle who is the owner of the pub of the town. Tairu's best friend is named Clement, Tairu and Clement always hangs out together at the pond just outside the pub.

Name:Clement
Age:18
Class:Wizard
Nation:Soladian
Weapon:Staffs/Rods
Description:Clement is a young, bossy and playful boy, he always hangs out with Tairu the main protagonist and his best friend, Clement always likes to hang out with Tairu at the town pond. When Clement was 10 his parent was killed by the the Aranodon'.

More Character info will come soon.

Screenshots:
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Credits:
Enterbrain
Originalwij
KGC
Mr anoynemus(I don't know how to spell his name)
Yanfly
Kaduki
Vixotic
neosky
SDS creator
Ryan A(For seeing his map tutorial)

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Recruitment:
Team Mates:
Head Of Game:Dark Santum/Mooglelow
Musician:I need this really.
Mapper:ME!,I really really really need this one so please help!
Logo Artist:Me! and i need another artist!
Face Artist:I really need this..
Writer/Proof reader:ME!,I really really need this one my grammar is bad.
Tester:ME!,I really need this too.
Spriter:I really need this so please join!

Demo:
None yet really sorry the demo will be released soon so please wait!

Support:

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Yah, you really need to work on your maps.
I see you are hiring a mapper, that's probally the best choice, but don't be afraid to post a few maps in the mapping improvement thread. :]
 
As above, mapping could use improvement. Story is cliche, some interesting plot twists could easily fix this. And you could use some help with your grammar and spelling. For example, second screenshot : "a lot of innocent people are DIEING everyday because of the Rioku's"

Should be DYING not DIEING.
 
Ok, the maps aint so good but they aint ridiculously crap either. I get the picture about your characters classes and stuff but maybe you should add why the main character is a swordsman and why his friend is a wizard. How did they become a wizard and who trained them because it is too strange that they are already thier classes without and explanation. I hope playing your game will explain that...
 

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