I created a new song. This time it is based on modern warfare. Battlefield is a loop. It will make good use in games.
http://www.save-tara.com/downloads/prom ... efield.mp3
http://www.save-tara.com/downloads/prom ... efield.mp3
Modern Warfare Based Song (Battlefield)
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!Perihelion
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Well, I checked out your site, and while your music is pretty good, I've gotta ask: haven't you ever heard of modesty? Pimping your stuff out as THE BEST THING EVER is a huge turn-off.
To offer some actual feedback on this song, I like it, but I'm horrible at music critiques, so I don't have much else to say. It reminds me of Holst's "Mars", though.
Edit: Actually, I think it could use some more variation in the melody. I like the atmosphere, but it gets very samey after a while, especially for something you might hear every battle.
Edit x2: For example, the Xenogears boss theme has this one cool soft part that does a lot for the piece by breaking up the tone for a second. I'm probably describing this really badly, but um, oh well. Listen to it and you get the idea, hopefully.
To offer some actual feedback on this song, I like it, but I'm horrible at music critiques, so I don't have much else to say. It reminds me of Holst's "Mars", though.
Edit: Actually, I think it could use some more variation in the melody. I like the atmosphere, but it gets very samey after a while, especially for something you might hear every battle.
Edit x2: For example, the Xenogears boss theme has this one cool soft part that does a lot for the piece by breaking up the tone for a second. I'm probably describing this really badly, but um, oh well. Listen to it and you get the idea, hopefully.
Perihelion is right. It's a general fault that most composers, even I especially, have. Something we don't take into consideration when we're writing. Leads only do so much for an amount of time and the song itself, begs for a variation. A 'solid' song like this needs at least 3 or 4 sections that changes the mood. Takes a LOT of work to come up with something to fit in nicely.