Malicks Sprite Workshop

[Malachi]

Before I start getting into all the spritey goodness...

THESE SPRITES ARE NOT FOR PUBLIC USE! I AM POSTING THESE FOR CRTIQUE AND CRITIQUE ONLY!

Now that we've got that out of the way, it's time to show you some sprites I'm working on for my project: Vagrant Destiny. The critique process is simple. If you find a fault, PLEASE and I mean PLEASE speak up about it! I won't be able to improve if I don't know the faults. Of course, if there are none, please do feel free to fill me with praise!

Finished:
http://img209.imageshack.us/img209/8803/alexisva7.png[/img]
http://img64.imageshack.us/img64/7769/edwinit3.png[/img]
http://img64.imageshack.us/img64/5067/solonle0.png[/img]
http://img68.imageshack.us/img68/3834/r ... lonci9.png[/img]
WIPS:
http://img187.imageshack.us/img187/4340/shuyuwz9.png[/img]
http://img247.imageshack.us/img247/9215/shuyu2yy0.png[/img]
http://img61.imageshack.us/img61/7134/sprite2wc2.png[/img]
http://img65.imageshack.us/img65/4108/npc01hw9.png[/img]
http://img214.imageshack.us/img214/1608/alaniaab3.png[/img]

I will update this topic whenever I make an adjustment to any of these sprites. So now that the posting is done....CRITIQUE and or PRAISE AWAY!

 

[Malachi]

UPDATE!
New WIP added
http://img214.imageshack.us/img214/1608/alaniaab3.png[/img]

 

[Mustardy85]

ummm...

What happens if we say 'please'? May we then use it?

~Great Sprites

 

[CeruSkye]

UPDATE!
New WIP added
http://img214.imageshack.us/img214/1608/alaniaab3.png[/img]

This ones my favorite. ^__^

 

[Makio-Kuta]

Looking cool. Though I do wonder about the half kaizer version's hair. It looks good on the Tyke character, but on the HK the hair in the back spikes a smidge bit strange.
The second Tyke sprite's hair covers the right eye a lot on the front view, but when viewing her on that side, her bangs seem to be different.

Other than that, they look good to me. XD Especially the Tyke version of the orange haired fellow.

 

[Malachi]

Haha, glad you like Solon. Anyway, on m latest I've made the high light of the green undercoat more close the edge so it doesn't look so pillow shaded.
http://img167.imageshack.us/img167/1121/alaniayr3.png[/img]
Apart from that, no real progress. Been watching Claymore.

 

[Ratty524]

Not bad sprites you got there. :D

 

[Malachi]

UPDATE
http://img167.imageshack.us/img167/7476/alaniaop7.png[/img]

Please give me some comments on how to improve the sprite.

 

[CeruSkye]

Sprites looking quite nice. The only thing I would say is there is a little too much definition on the sideview where the bust is. The coat/ top looks as if it fits loosely in the front view, but form hugging in the sideview. =/ Otherwise, very good. XD

 

[Ratty524]

UPDATE
http://img167.imageshack.us/img167/7476/alaniaop7.png[/img]

Please give me some comments on how to improve the sprite.

Is it me or do the pants look a bit pillow-shaded? Try to avoid that, it can be hard since you seem to be trying to give shadow by the shirt and keeping the shades of the rest of the pants...

 

[bojox3m]

Hey Malick, what template did you use for this cuttie here? http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y164/h ... yu2yy0.png[/img]

 

[Malachi]

Invisabledrifters TYKE2

 

[Malachi]

Is it me or do the pants look a bit pillow-shaded? Try to avoid that, it can be hard since you seem to be trying to give shadow by the shirt and keeping the shades of the rest of the pants...

They probably are pillow shaded. I didn't really put much effort into them seeing as you can't really see them.
==EDIT==
OOps just realised that I double posted sorry.

 

[Malachi]

Update:
http://img407.imageshack.us/img407/9586 ... eldlg1.png[/img]

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