MainChraracter of my game "SouLWaKe"

[Admiral David]

rough draft/sketch of the main character in my new game called SouLWaKe, i'm getting started on the others right after the post, so let me kno what you think! i'm not sure why but it WONT display the full sized version!!??? moderator help please

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[MCsephiroth13]

I like it. It gives the impression that he's not a real hero at first but then becomes one...or something. You should give more wrinkles on the hoody, especially on the bottom and where the sleeves are rolled up, because hoodies are rather thick.

 

[mawk]

it looks alright from where I'm standing, but the picture you have there is too tiny to see enough detail to make any real useful remarks. I see a couple things that look like they might be things worth commenting on, but I don't feel like speaking entirely in hypothetical terms.

 

[NexS]

as stated above, the picture is very small and faint.
also, to make the picture computer-able, you'll need to give the outlines some darkening, otherwise any attempt to colour it will be nice and difficult.

I will hold off my opinion until I can see the image clearly, but the character's attitude is quite evident in the pose- very nice

*EDIT*
One thing i will say, though, is about the placement of the waist point. upon a second look, i noticed that the point at which the jumper hits the trousers is quite low. i'd say keep the torso proportional to add realism - raise the waistline just a fraction =>