Magica,

[Pl0x]

Magica
One Of My new game's, Magic Themed Like Magic Attacks
The Story
3000 Years Ago There was A King named King Chaos.
He Has Made 4 stones (Chaos Healing Energy And Dark) Who Give The Owner of the stones Unbelivible Power.
The Stones Where stolen By an Unknown Knight, He burry'd the stones, And Killd Himself.

Now 60000 Years Later There Was big chaos.
There where 4 kids Who Heard About The Stones And They Where The Chosen One To Find The Stones.
But They Need To Learn A lot Of There Own Powers.
They Will Find The Stones But Will They Survive?
Will They Save Our World?


The Caracters
{Aisa}
Age: 13
Sex: Male
About Him: He Is kinda Fun He likes To Play football he was champion in 2003
State: Normal

{Pascal}
Age: 14
Sex: Male
About Him: A Real Beast He Likes To Fight, But He Cant Fight Without Drinking Beer,
State: Normal


{Aisy}
Age: 16
Sex: Female
About Her: She Is A Real Charming Girl, She Can Kiss Like God,
State: Broken Arm

{Lisbhy}
Age: 15
Sex: Female
About Her: She Is a Real Traveler She know's Almost evreything about traveling When she was 3 she Has Build Her First Treehouse.
State: Broken Leg.


The Game Itself
Scripting ///0%////////
Mapping ///1%///////
Secrets ///9%/////
Caracters ///0%/

Script's Used
* Battle Report

Im Dutch english isn't My Best

 

[brainstorm]

-sorry but ew... I need alot more information... The story kinda sux.... Info in the Characters kinda sux... Look at some other projects... Your information needs some serious help.

 

[kaze950]

What sasuke says. I take it english isn't your first language, but if it is...wow. But yeah, telling the names of the characters and their ages doens't tell us much. You also didn't say anything about the story/plot.

About this part

The Style
Some Sort Of magic Style,

I have no idea what that is supposed to mean, lol

 

[Pl0x]

Ive Edited It, Makd It Better But Remember im dutch not english =]

 

[Jstreet]

http://www.rmxp.org/forums/showthread.php?t=18614

 

[kaze950]

Well, nothing really stands out from the story. But, if the 4 stones thing happened 3000 years ago, why does it say 60000 years later?

Also, the kids saving the world has been overdone. Maybe 1 or 2 youg people, but I find it hard to believe that 4 kids who are 16 years old and under can save the world, especilly when two of them have a broken leg or arm.

And what is this "big chaos" you speak of?

 

[Pl0x]

You will see if The game Is out =]