LuX's WIP Thread

[LuX]

At the moment I’m working on my own template.
It is for the ORPG Project „Fallen Empire Online“, but the RMXP Project „Twilight of Darkness“ (both games are german) is also allowed to use it.
That means it is NOT allowed to use the Template (or parts of it).

Maybe it will be released when both games are finished!

http://img102.imageshack.us/img102/7471/2charmq6.png[/IMG]

Feo (only front) Templates

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http://img523.imageshack.us/img523/9679/partyqx3.png[/img]

(There are already some animations and clothes, but they are not complete or will be over-worked.)

Female Garet Template (no one will use except me cause of breeze XD)

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http://img516.imageshack.us/img516/2771/garetwlm6.png[/IMG]

Male Garet Template

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http://img516.imageshack.us/img516/9407/garetmye6.png[/IMG]

Demy Garet Char [WIP]

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http://img516.imageshack.us/img516/5563/garetw01ap6.png[/IMG]

The Garet Template is free for non commercial use and a credit or link.

Hope for some comments and improvement suggestions! ^.^

 

[Venetia]

Realistic proportions, which I like, but the girl template is butt-less! That girl ain't got no butt . Her bikini bottom looks the same in back as in front, and for 99.999% of girls, it's bigger back there--atleast, it should be >_>

The dude has hips that're about 1 pixel too wide.

And I'd like it better if they both had slightly more belled-out faces--their chins come to a drastic point that might look decent with long hair, but w/o long hair it's hard to tell where the face ends and the neck begins, especially on crappy monitors like these I have @ work.

Despite the criticisms though it's a very attractive template, good job on it.

Is this the one Blogdog kept trying to steal? XD

 

[LuX]

The nacked version have a butt xD
I was a little bit lazy with the underwear =P

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http://img371.imageshack.us/img371/2062/buttob6.png[/img]

Warning: nacked butt ;D hrhr

And I'd like it better if they both had slightly more belled-out faces--their chins come to a drastic point that might look decent with long hair, but w/o long hair it's hard to tell where the face ends and the neck begins, especially on crappy monitors like these I have @ work.

?.? What? I think theres everthing alright with the had and the neck? A thicker neck would look horrible >.<

Thank you for your suggestions!!!

I edit der chars in the first post ^.^

 

[ZephyrSkye]

No, I think she means a wider chin. It looks like the chin is stuck to the neck on the frontviews otherwise.
You could also just drop the head a pixel on the frontview and that would fix it too, though it would be hard to match with the other views after that.

 

[LuX]

I can't drop the the head a pixel... okay i can... but then it looks horrible >.<
http://img504.imageshack.us/img504/8528 ... barfe3.png[/img]

 

[CeruSkye]

Very nice little template. They look like mini half kaizers. I like it, keep up the good work. Unfortunately, I don't have any critiques to add that haven't already been added. ^__^

 

[LuX]

xD Yeah im watching the hk poses.[especially the side views ] (no other template have sooo many poses)
But thats not my only inspiration ^.^
Ahruon, Wayuki, Fool, st0ven and many more.
And Bill Browns,Interos and Harry Gregson Williams Music
:love01: Oooooh i love them :love01:

In view days i edit some more animations and the diagonal version ^.^

http://img168.imageshack.us/img168/6123/animorect2.gif[/img]
Design by Nana

 

[ZephyrSkye]

The neck looks better there. It must be because she has a collar. Although there seems to be very little hading in the orange part of her clothing. Otherwise, I really like this template. Finish your game so you can release this to the public.

 

[Sen]

Is this the one Blogdog kept trying to steal?

I Dont steel anythink -.- http://anotherworld.pytalhost.eu/Forum/thread.php?threadid=68 there you see it -.-

 

[Sen]

?hm why my post will delete? I will only say that i dont steal anythink from this template -.-'

 

[Venetia]

Oh, please. Let's not get into that again.

Nice work, LuX. Yes, I would recommend some cloth-folds in the skirt, but otherwise it's pretty solid.

 

[LuX]

Big thanks ^-^
I edit the animation (legs) a little bit and the clothes, in some days i post the new version of the chars.

In the first thread i added my wip temp and doll

 

[WalkingAbomination]

The doll looks cool :thumb:, i think you need to fix the right side of the body under the breast though, hope you don't mind that i made an example since i can't explain it well.

I think that's right, but if i'm wrong someone speak up please.
http://i167.photobucket.com/albums/u132 ... mple-2.png[/IMG]

 

[RavenTDA]

Yeah that's a slight mistake there that Invisable Drifter pointed out. You would only see that if her body was turned slightly but it's obviously not considering how her stomach is. You might want to further adjust her side (her left our right) and tuck it in a few pixles more so that the line meeting the breast is slightly under like it is on the other side.

 

[LuX]

Big thanks u 2!!!
I correct it ^-^
I dont finished the big doll yet xD
It so much work =P (and i have so many things to do ^^)

BIG UPDATE in the first thread

 

[RavenTDA]

I really like the differnt races you have there, especially the fox one. Now is the lower height version your child template for boys and girls? It looks mroe like a teenager so you might want to go much shorter for a kid. Looking good so far.

 

[Chateaux]

Waaaaaaahhhhh Garet Template *-*
Garet's happyyy
xD

When I finnish my Garet, I will make a double of him in that template
XD

You and your templates rox Colly \o

Congratulations ^^