LORD OF SWORD II : DRAGON KING CRYSTAL KNIGHT
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6 years man? Little critique here but in that time don't you think you could have spell checked? There were errors in your dialogue not to mention the h-u-age name the character had, have a faceset or at least but a seperate name box above the dialogue box.
Work on that title screen graphic for it looks like a sword a child would make while playing as a pirate, the screen is going to be a main selling point for a potential player.
Put some originality into the characters. Who wants to see an Ichigo and crew pic for characters, get help desiging them if you can't create them yourself.
And finally I would work on the story itself, the characters are somewhat cliched and the plot of 'there was the war with the dragons and it's been a thousand years since' has been done quite a lot.
Otherwise keep on working.
Work on that title screen graphic for it looks like a sword a child would make while playing as a pirate, the screen is going to be a main selling point for a potential player.
Put some originality into the characters. Who wants to see an Ichigo and crew pic for characters, get help desiging them if you can't create them yourself.
And finally I would work on the story itself, the characters are somewhat cliched and the plot of 'there was the war with the dragons and it's been a thousand years since' has been done quite a lot.
Otherwise keep on working.
OrigamiRose
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That made me lol. I don't think anyone would steal this idea.
Your grammar pretty much lack..alot. The story is cliché, and the maps are confusing, and I can see alot of errors.
Work on the story, correct the grammar, and read some mapping tutorials.
How can... this... not be... a joke?
There is so many stupidity in this post it's making my brain boil (and die of laughter, but that's another story). It's like you took every single cliché, added bad anime and awful third grade Mongolian grammar added mixed everything into the blender.
On top of that you're planning to sell this garbage for 30 dollars, have started with the second installment and aren't planning to be done until 2011?
ARE YOU FUCKING JOKING? If you're trying to make a satire, get this: you're not funny! There is a fine line between parody and outright stupidity, and you must've been 'round the world and crossed that line a thousand times.
So, scrap the entire thing. NOW.
EDIT: I just saw the whole "loading time like in commercial games lol" thing, thus confirming that you're just joking. I must say, a little relieved. However, you're not funny. All you're doing is aggravating us.
There is so many stupidity in this post it's making my brain boil (and die of laughter, but that's another story). It's like you took every single cliché, added bad anime and awful third grade Mongolian grammar added mixed everything into the blender.
On top of that you're planning to sell this garbage for 30 dollars, have started with the second installment and aren't planning to be done until 2011?
ARE YOU FUCKING JOKING? If you're trying to make a satire, get this: you're not funny! There is a fine line between parody and outright stupidity, and you must've been 'round the world and crossed that line a thousand times.
So, scrap the entire thing. NOW.
EDIT: I just saw the whole "loading time like in commercial games lol" thing, thus confirming that you're just joking. I must say, a little relieved. However, you're not funny. All you're doing is aggravating us.
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