Like-- my second one

[shiroun]

I think this is my (second, maybe 3rd) character set I ever did.

http://img143.imageshack.us/img143/5972/saosinxz4.png[/IMG]

any comments? I don't really know how to blend it so tips are appreciated.


Ok, I followed all your advice. Please don't kill me.

I'm making an angel-- thingy.

http://img91.imageshack.us/img91/4452/angeljc9.png[/IMG]

the pallet is on the left. I tried to shade it.

 

[Jason]

Umm, did you colour that in using a graphic tablet because it looks really wierd, and it lacks shading, try to use a better range of shades.

 

[Mundane]

I don't really know what it is...The shading is what needs work...For the lack of detail thats on there.

 

[Rare]

...

It looks like it's melting.

 

[Colormagix]

Wow, I suggest you read some tutorials.

 

[shiroun]

There are tutorials for spriting?

Link me =D?

 

[Sles]

There are tutorials for everything.

 

[Despain]

...how...

how could anyone even




just

this is mind boggling

 

[bojjenclon]

what the heck is that thing?

 

[Colormagix]

...how...

how could anyone even




just

this is mind boggling

Lol, hahaha that was super funny.

Yes there are tutorials for spriting.

 

[Sles]

ColorMagix.org has tutorials^

 

[Danton Lavergne]

Request a mod to delete this thread, gain your self respect back, and try again using Paint.

 

[shiroun]

Serenade stfu. I said it was my 2nd one I didn't know.
B.T.W. update

 

[Despain]

Why the hell did you blur the edges of the template.

 

[Dawne]

START > ALL PROGRAMS > ACCSESSORIES > MS PAINT:thumb:

 

[Ratty524]

MS Paint? Try graphics gale or something else. >_<

 

[Dawne]

OR! Stop making sprites all together!:D

 

[Danton Lavergne]

Yeah, and don't tell me to stfu :p.

 

[Rare]

Why the hell did you blur the edges of the template.

Why the hell did he use the blur tool period on a SPRITE.

Sorry both look really, really bad. It's so bad it makes Photoshop look like shit. Please don't make my friend look like shit .

Sorry I don't like being mean...but holy crap. It needs so much work.

 

[Ratty524]

... Wow.

First off, shiroun, your sprites lack shading and possess no outline. It's barely even distinguishable as to what they are.

Also, work on your attitude. Telling people to "stfu" when all they are doing is giving constructive criticism shows that you really don't want critique so much as just "sugar-coated" replies. So... yeah.