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Legends, the untold history of good and evil in the ancient land of Tamyara

So, here it is. The complete summary of my new story, not just that this will be my new RMXP game.
Please read and review, I need critic responses.

Legends, the untold history of good and evil in the ancient land of Tamyara
By Narok the Enchanted
(Translated by The Storyteller)



The Ancient Worlds I: B.C.
- Settlers from Southern Eurasia come by boat to this new land
- The settlers make a settlement and start cities
- The natives on this land are not happy with their intruders
- The natives start a war with the settlers
- The settlers are to advanced for the natives
- The settlers build up cities all over this place
- They call this place Tamyara
- They set up a countries called Nicrea, Gyron, Goninhood, and Ailuese
- A new time has started, the time of war
The Ancient Worlds II: The Fall of Ailuese
- The Kings and Lords of Tamyara start to despise each other
- Selling each  other out to the next one, the once united Tamyara has fallen
- The Lord of Ailuese does not agree with the plan that Nicrea’s Lord proposed
- Ailuese pulls out of the Tamyaran Army
- Gyron’s King pulls out of the Tamyaran Army also
- Nicrea stays put and heads into Ailuese
- Gyron heads to their borders to defend from the oncoming Goninhood Army
- Goninhood’s Lord brings peace with them, not wanting war from Gyron
- Gyron and Goninhood give support to Ailuese
- Ailuese takes big hits from the Nicrean Army
- Ailuese’s Lord and Nicrea’s Lord go head to head, Ailuese’s Lord falls
- Nicrea moves in even farther towards Ailuese’s capital of Desain.
- As Goninhood take shots at Nicrea from behind, the Gyron Army is taken down to hardly any men and have to retreat
- Goninhood retreats as their King falls
- Ailuese fends for themselves as their capital falls
- Nicrea takes over a lot of land, taking all of Ailuese for themselves, parts of Gyron and parts of Goninhood
The Ancient Worlds III: Rise of Hades
- Nicrea has an army of over ten thousand
- Nicrea has gained a Lord related to the Greek God of the Underworld, Lazarus Hades
- Lazarus Hades (663) takes his army into Gyron to speak with their King
- (Gyron and Goninhood have grown so small they are too small to be considered countries, therefore they no longer have Lords. They both have Kings.)
- Hades speaks with the Gyron King, doesn’t like what he hears and takes out Gyron’s King
- Hades lets out destruction throughout Gyron
- He now heads south through Gyron and into Goninhood
- Hades meets with the Goninhood King and does not succeed to kill him, instead takes huge losses in his army from a Goninhood sneak attack
- Leaving and going back into Nicrea with one successful round of attacks he is pleased
- Gyron elects a new King, Onyxi I, to lead Gyron in their war against Nicrea
- Ten years pass by with no attacks, until a huge ship pulls up on the Silver Coast (North Gyron and South Nicrea)
- Hades is distracted by this huge ship and this gives a chance for Onyxi I to lead Gyron on a back way to attack Nicrea
- Goninhood follows suit attacking Nicrea from behind
- The men on the huge ship are actually new settlers from the newly formed Asia
- The settlers from the huge ship are attacked and annihilated by the Nicrean army
- Gyron and Goninhood hit Nicrea hard, taking out their cities
o No prisoners, No survivors
- As Hades comes back in from a destruction at the Silver Coast he sees that Southern Nicrea is in total destruction, fires in every city
- Goninhood’s King, Sampson Henry II, takes Hades dead on in battle
- Hades and Henry are locked in battle, no escaping alive for both, one must die
- Gyron’s King attacks Hades from behind with an arrow, taking him to his knees
o It is about time you bowed before me
- Henry kills Hades, who lets out a shriek so loud and sharp that everyone in battle had to close their ears before they burst
- Sixty years pass by when the next Hades rises up
- Lazarus Hades (664) rises up to take control of Nicrea
- Goninhood has grown bigger now since the defeat of Hades (663)
- Gyron has grown bigger now too, now lead by Onyxi II
- Nicrea’s land size has shrunk by 1/6
- Goninhood is no longer controlled by a King, but now by Lord Henry II, a Oneberry on the Lordship rank
- Hades is busy building up his army again
- Goninhood births a new city, Siluese, which means City of the Soldier
The Ancient Worlds IV: Rise of Hades 2
- In the middle of a huge war between Goninhood and Nicrea twenty years back, a Nicrean Soldier is born, one of the greatest to ever live, the birth of Nork
- Nork is one of the commanders of the Nicrean army
- Goninhood’s Lord, Sampson Henry IV, is in close battles with the commander of Nicrea, Koffinhook
- Koffinhook’s team of Yermin, the strongest bred soldiers in all of Tamyara, are on a warpath in Northern Gyron
- Up in Northwest Nicrea, Lazarus Hades (666) is up in his castle atop Mount Lovaer watching as his army crushes down on Gyron and Goninhood
- Gyron’s King (for they have still not gained a size worthy of a Lord), John Onyxi III, is staying back in Gyron preparing for any onslaught from Nicrea
- Goninhood still takes hits at the Nicrean Army, taking more of their army down each time; still losing some of their army also though
- Numbers hitting in the low thousands for Goninhood, with all the deaths the newly crowned Lord of Goninhood could be a King in days time
- Two years pass by when a plague hit South Tamyara
- The plague knocks out massive amounts of both the Gyron and Goninhood Armies and population
- The Tamyaran God, Thermopkloe, brings peace back to Gyron and Goninhood stopping the plague in South Tamyara
- Before the plague was stopped, a lone women from Northeast Goninhood snuck into Nicrea releasing it among their cities
- Now with the upper hand Gyron and Goninhood move in for what would be one of the last attacks on Nicrea
Legends I: Exodus
- PROLOUGE (Many years ago)
- Icarus, a young man holds a child in his arms
- A woman name Vischilla comes up over the horizon
- She tells Icarus to give her the child
- Icarus says no and is eventually killed as Vischilla takes the child
- She brings the child back over the horizon and the story starts up
- STORY
- Viruses have hit many in Nicrea
- Hades is hidden away in his tower on Mount Lovaer
- Goninhood’s King goes to talk with the Gyron King.
- They speak of a new attack on Nicrea
- The Gyron King hesitates about attacking Nicrea
- Goninhood’s King finds this weakness and leaves him be
- Both armies decide to attack Nicrea while they are weak
- Nicrea’s army is not affected by the plague as the plague never got past the first village.
- Gyron’s King disappears from the battle field
- A young boy from Gyron leaves his post to fight, his name is Oken
- On his way out he runs into a man, Nork
- Nork charges at him with a huge roar
- Oken gets really scared and cuts Nork across the chest
- At this Oken sees Nork’s eyes are not of a normal color, they are bloodshot red
- The attack awoke Nork from his drugged state
- Nork falls down weak to the ground
- Oken lifts his sword to stab him and kill him
- A soldier from Goninhood on a horse charges over to stop him
- When Oken refuses he was killed
- Nork was lifted onto the horse and taken back to Gyron
- The Gyron and Goninhood’s army escaped Nicrea after the unexpected loss
- Gyron’s King showed up hours later
- Gyron’s King left again and did not return
- Nork trained in Gyron, becoming one of them
- One Year Later
- Nork took control of Gyron’s army and went south to meet up with Goninhood
- Nork left a young general in charge while he went off to look around
- While walking around he met up with an old man
- Back with the Gyron army they successfully made it into Goninhood
- Nork comes back with the army and talks to them of what he experienced
- He became what legends have been told, he became the Exodus of legends. (The Exodus is an all powering warrior, told in legends to be an army in one)
- They power themselves for the next attack
- Two Years Later
- They are fully trained up now
- They lead an attack on Nicrea
- The attack was on South Nicrea
- Nork led the Goninhood/Gyron army alongside the Goninhood king
- Hades was in the field of battle this time
- He was taking out the Goninhood/Gyron frontline like it was nothing
- Huge masses of Gyron’s army was killed
- Gyron retreated back, but Nork stayed to help Goninhood
- Goninhood ended up retreating and quit altogether with attacking Nicrea
- Gyron and Goninhood no longer tried to attack Nicrea, instead they let Nicrea come to them
- The next attack ended up being days later in North Gyron
- Nicrea charged in and took out many forces
- The King of Gyron led the assault
- Ends up he was working with Hades this whole time and gave plans to Hades of how to get a sneak attack on Gyron
- Nork and the King of Gyron went at it
- The King of Gyron told his story of how he traded Gyron for peace
- Nork killed the King
- The battle went on late into the night
Legends II: Nations in the Ancient Worlds
- It is a time of destruction and war
- Nicrea is taking over most of the land
- The Silver Coast Area is becoming bigger each day with help from Hades
- Nork and his army of Gyroneans keep safe in South Gyron
- Goninhood is covered with protection
- For now there are no wars in Tamyara
- Peace has taken over
- Nork has left Gyron for the island on the east coast of Tamyara known as Highwaters
- There he meets up with Thermopkloe
- Nork is told of the ancient stories of Tamyara
- He told of how Tamyara became the place it is
- RECAP OF Ancient Worlds
- Nork thanks Thermopkloe for the talk
- Nork heads back towards Gyron
- On his way he hears a scream
- There is fire coming from Goninhood
- Nork charges into Goninhood
- Goninhood’s King comes up to Nork and tells him to leave
- Nork talks to him real fast about what is happening
- Goninhood’s King tells him again to leave because he should not die because of the attack
- Nork leaves and watches the King run back into the battle
- 2 MONTHS LATER
- Nork finds out that Goninhood’s King is dead and most of Goninhood is taken out
- Gyron prepares for the attack from Nicrea
- Peace in Tamyara is over with
- Hades comes to talk with Nork
- Nork tells him to get out of Gyron or pay for it
- Nicrea launches an attack on Gyron now
- Nork was ready and got them to back out of Gyron
- Nork and Gyron go back into South Gyron
- On the retreat Nicrea launches several arrows and one hits Nork
- He falls to the ground not moving
- One of Gyron’s soldiers picks him up and drags him along
Legends III: Rise
- Hades is up in his castle atop a mountain
- He looks out over all of Tamyara, noticing Gyron and Goninhood burning
- He laughs and walks down to his prison chamber
- There sits the Goninhood King, tied up to the wall
- Hades tries to reason with him, Nork for his own life
- The King spits in his face
- Hades takes him by the hair and throws him across the room
- At this point the King is almost dead
- Hades drags him to show him that Goninhood is burning
- Hades then pushes him off the cliff
- The King falls all the way and dies
- Nork is laying on the ground dead
- The medics are working hard to stop the bleeding and save him
- Nork, being the Exodus, has extra energy stored up for times like this and pulls onto that reserve to keep himself alive
- He coughs up blood and awakens
- Everyone is shocked around him and lets him get up
- He is very weak and rests
- A knock on the hut brings news from Goninhood
- They said that they needed help rebuilding
- Nork tells them to say he is weak and cannot help them now
- Nork fully rests for months
- His wound healed up all the way and he heads to speak with Thermopkloe
- Thermopkloe asks him to come with him to the remains of Ailuese
- Nork does that, and while there he talks with Thermopkloe
- Nork sees where city once was, how they were all killed by Nicrea
- Thermopkloe warns Nork to not think they are to safe
- What little is left of the city is a few scraps of buildings
- Nork and Thermopkloe talk of the Berry Lordship
- Nork completes a task with Thermopkloe to become a Oneberry
- Nork thanks Thermopkloe for his help and goes on his way
- Nork is ambushed by raiders from the Silver Coast
- He is taken to the Silver Coast as a prisoner and they call upon Hades
- Nork picks up a stick and bashes one of the raiders
- He gets into a brawl with one of the other raiders
- Nork ends up escaping the Silver Coast
- He sees a wanderer working on his spiritual quest
- Nork asks him to come to Gyron because it is not safe out there
- He goes with Nork and they head to Gyron
- Hades is in his tower when he gets the message that the Silver Coast Raiders captured Nork
- Hades kills the messenger since he already knew Nork got away from the Silver Coast
- Hades looks out onto his vast lands of Nicrea and goes down under his castle
- Underneath he speaks with two twins
- The twins accept Hades offer, the offer that they are set free if they summon a Housonseven for him
- A Housonseven speaks with Hades of his proposal
- Hades wants to take all of the Housonsevens and give them an appropriate home
- The home of the Sevenberries, Seven, and island south of Tamyara
- Housonseven agrees and they shake hands
- Hades laughs and looks out to see an army of thousands
- Hades was ready for war on Seven
- The ships were getting packed up
Legends IV: City of the Gods
- Nork is back in Goninhood with the army
- They haven’t heard anything from Nicrea in months
- Wondering where they are, he heads to the border of Goninhood
- There he sees empty land ahead, Nicrea was empty of all civilization
- Then a messenger comes from an island to the very south of Tamyara
- He says he is from Seven, the land of Lordship, the home of Thermopkloe
- He says that they are getting attacked by Hades and the evil version of the Berry Lordship, Houson.
- Hades and many Housonsevens are attacking Seven along with the whole army of Nicrea
- Nork gets the whole Goninhood army ready for dispersal aboard their warship
- Before they can leave raiders from the Silver Coast attack them
- They burn down their cities and kill many of their women
- The soldiers are either captured or killed
- The Silver Coast is becoming stronger each day
- On the island of Seven Thermopkloe is watching as the whole army of Nicrea and Housonsevens attack his shores
- Not wanting to fight, because Sevenberries and Priests do not use violence, he takes all of his priests with him underground to the Sanctuary of Shining Hope.
- There Thermopkloe sits waiting for Nork’s arrival
- Nork has everyone that is left loaded up and sent off towards Seven as he fends for himself at Goninhood.
- By himself he holds off all the raiders and kills them
- He tries his best to gather himself together and head to Seven
- On Seven, Thermopkloe has noticed Nork has yet to arrive on his shores to help
- Thermopkloe, disappointed in Nork, goes out and fights off the oncoming attack
- As he is finishing off a Housonseven he sees a huge ship arrive and start firing arrows out of its sides.
- Nork had arrived with his army, except Nork was not there still
- But the Goninhood army attacking Nicrea from behind and the Sevenberries attacking the Housonsevens the war wasn’t going to bad now
- Thermopkloe headed back underground to stay safe
- Hades was on the battleground attacking the priests that hadn’t made it to safety yet
- The Housonsevens were losing fast and Hades retreated back to Nicrea
- The war was over with and Seven was safe again
- Thermopkloe then worked on putting safety borders around Seven
- Hades was back in Tamyara when he heard an explosion
- Out on the shores of Nicrea was hundreds of men
- The Housons had come to Tamyara, this time for revenge
Legends V: Destruction of Tamyara
- The Housonseven leaders, Sonoki and his sister Sonoku, head to Northern Nicrea to speak with Hades about their failed takeover of Seven
- They tell Hades how disappointed they are with him and tell him to watch his back
- Hades tells them something in an unrecognizable language; Gorshna Flah is the exact words. It is an ancient language.
- They turn around and look straight at Hades and point with a long bony finger
- Sonoki tells him to watch his back because they aren’t anymore
- They walk out of his area, Hades sits down and overlooks Nicrea
- Back in Goninhood the search was on for Nork
- Nork had disappeared when the army left for Seven
- Someone came screaming and running into Goninhood
- The person that came in said Nork and the Onyx Gates
- The person he told knew what the Onyx Gates were, the gates that protected Goninhood from Ailuese many years ago, the gates that now hold the past of Tamyara, the gates of sacrifice
- Nork is stuck at the gates and cannot leave
- Rouge Worshipers attack him and want to use him for sacrificing
- Nork fights back but because he is a Oneberry is restricted to killing them
- Help arrives and they take out the Rouges
- Nork heads back to Goninhood and leaves them in peace
- From their he talks with the Goninhood leaders and lets them be
- He heads home back to Gyron
- Back with Hades now, he is still overlooking the lands of Nicrea
- Hades sees in the far distance a huge black mist coming out of the water
- He recognizes this mist as Housonsevens, wondering why they were here he heads that way
- What Hades saw made him turn and run back to his castle, a whole village was slaughtered
- Hades sees that Nicrea is in no shape to fight with evil gods, so Hades makes the last choice he would ever want to make, ask for help
- Hades heads down towards Goninhood to meet with Goninhood and Gyron’s leaders
- When Hades arrives there he gets stared at strangely and swords were drawn
- Hades bowed to the approaching soldiers and asked to speak with their leaders
- They followed him to the meeting room and they all sat down
- They talked for hours over the attack and why Hades needs their help
- Goninhood’s leader refused to help Hades and Nicrea, even when Goninhood was threatened by the attack
- Nork ultimately refused to help and ordered to take Hades out of lower Tamyara or he will be killed.
- Hades got up with this and left that place heading back to prepare for war
- Nicrea was getting crushed by the Housonsevens and their minions
- Back in Goninhood, the leader and Nork talked about what Hades wanted
- They decided to attack Nicrea from behind while they were weak
- As they did this Hades was walking up to Sonoki and Sonoku to plea
- They took him up and brought him to a secluded area
- Nork and Gyron went in for an attack on Nicrea, when they did this a few Housonsevens came in from Nicrea
- Gyron’s forces were crushed under this attack and they had to retreat into Goninhood
- The Housonsevens burnt Gyron to the ground leaving nothing
- Nork helped out with Goninhood and attacked the oncoming Housonsevens that took over Gyron
- Nork and Goninhood were successful in defeating the HousonGyron
- Back with Hades he was carried away to a spot where the Housonsevens told him a saying he would always remember
o You are, all of you, vermin! Cowering in the dirt thinking... what? That you might escape the coming fire? Your country will burn until its surface is but black!
- Hades then realized he was cowering down and letting them win, so he stood up for himself. It was no help
- They took Hades by the head and leaned him over the rock, which overlooked Nicrea
- Down on the battlefield they could see up at the top of the castle a head fall from someone. Hades was dead.
- The cheering from Tamyara was heard throughout the nations, the evil was lifted. Yet there was still the Housonsevens to deal with.
- So Goninhood joined with what was left of Nicrea to finish off the Housonsevens, they were not doing well at all
- Thermop and his army of Sevenberries came in to finish off the evil Housonsevens
- The Housonsevens were no longer a threat to Tamyara ever again and went back into the abyss
- Thermop never leaves and decides to stay with Goninhood and take control
Legends VI: New World Order
- ONE WEEK AFTER DESTRUCTION
- Nork meets with the Goninhood king to discuss what needs to be done with Gyron
- They decide that Gyron needs to morph with Goninhood and just create one
- In Nicrea the son of Hades, Shinor Hades, takes control of Nicrea
- Being only twenty seven he is too young to know what he is doing and just stays in the castle all day
- After being a week without evil Nicrea knows they do not need a Hades in power and take a fully fledged attack on Hades’ Castle
- The castle falls and the son of Hades dies with it
- Now they can rest and be sure of no evil doings
- EIGHT MONTHS LATER
- In Simon, the capital of the newly formed Republic of Nicrea, there is a council meeting
- They have a meeting about the next leader
- (They went three months without a leader, then one was elected, four months later he was assassinated, now it is one more month later)
- All of the Criams (leaders) of the cities speak of how they should lead
- All the common folk are stuck outside to listen in, all the upper-class people are inside ready to vote for the next leader
- It is decided that Bjurk, a Black Coast General and Criam of the Black Coast is the new leader of Nicrea, decided by a landslide victory
- He starts by trying to rebuild what was destroyed in the war
- The destroyed Gyron was built into a training simulator for newcomers and to keep your skills sharp
- They practice stealth here and use the lands for farming and keeping animals
- The area of Southern Tamyara was now lead by Thermop himself so they claimed all surrounding land.
- Southern Tamyara was now called Aldënhood, consisting of Goninhood, South Nicrea (now taken over by the army of Goninhood), Weston, Aldën, Closewaters and Seven
- Bits of Goninhood were put together to make Aldën
- Aldën is the place where priests live and holds a shrine to the Sevenberries and a memorial for all that died in the God War, I and II
- Silver Coast has grown so big in size that they have no longer become raiders but a much more serious clan
- Peace has come in the lands
- EIGHT YEARS LATER
- Nork has become the leader of Aldënhood’s Army, AA for short
- Nicrea has split into three parts, North, East and West. All controlled by different leaders.
- A civil war began a year ago and started to bring back evil
- Nork continued to train new recruits to his army bringing them to a massive size
- The Silver Coast will always have evil so they must stay ready
Legends VII: Return
- ONE YEAR LATER
- Nork and Thermop are walking and talking about how the nation is going
- They are on a mountainside climbing to the top
- They are still in peace after Hades’ fall in Nicrea and are waiting for the Silver Coast to act up
- They continue to walk up the mountain
- Nork has become a Twoberry now and is gaining lordship each day
- Thermop tells Nork not to stray away to what is wrong, and always do what is right
- Back with Aldënhood, the leader of the once Goninhood, Vin Sycas, now was second in command
- He was telling the troops to gather around for a little spar match
- He left the arena and headed to the border of Aldënhood and civil war Nicrea
- There he entered into a cave
- Thermop and Nork were still walking up the mountain when they saw smoke
- They take off towards the edge to see a majority of the Silver Coast was in flames
- Exiting the Silver Coast and heading towards a huge cavern was about thirteen masked raiders. Two carried flags that had the symbols  (Death) and   (Devil God). Between these two symbols on the flag was the words ‘and’ and ‘the’. On their helmets was the symbol of Nicrea. These were the timetellers, the two twins that Hades kept in order to get answers, evil prophets. They were banished from the land if Hades was dead. The other eleven were the leaders of Eastern Nicrea.
- That meant that either Hades (666) or Hades (667) was still alive.
- Nork bowed to Thermop and left him to go back into Goninhood
- The priests of Aldën headed into their shelters to keep safe, they had no military experience
- Nork brought out AA to train for war, it had been almost ten years since the last one
- North and West Nicrea ended their war so they could train
- Somehow many years ago Hades lived through his death by the Housonsevens
- It was Hades (666) that was still alive, he trained his army after easily crushing North and West Nicrea
- Sycas came back from his cave around this time
- Evil had come back in Tamyara, and war was sure to happen, again
Legends VIII: Rise of Evil
- After Hades took over all but South Nicrea he decided to change the names
- Northern Nicrea was now known as Hgeishea Cyrnar, or Times of our Wars
- Eastern Nicrea was now known as Frando Venas, or Total Death from the Devil
- Western Nicrea was now known as Ywar, or Dwelling Lair
- Southern Nicrea was now known as Nicrea
- The Black Coast (changed to Orkain Coast when Hades died) became Aastrilunea
- Nork brought his army into Closewaters to keep safe until Hades attacked
- He did this one month later
- Hades led an army the size of 1000 nations
- Nork brought the army back into Aldënhood where he put up border watches
- They came by boat, Hades crushed the border forces and annihilated the land of Weston
- Entering in through Goninhood they caught Nork off guard
- AA was crushed by Hades, Goninhood was burned
- Aldën put up barriers to keep safe, Nicrea kept quiet, and Weston went off the map
- AA was failing badly. The war was going terrible and they were not winning anything
- By midnight on the first day death tolls had hit in the hundreds
- They retreated into Nicrea, hoping they would follow, they did
- Hades marched into Nicrea only to be hit by thousands of archers
- His men fell, thousands actually. The archers had a rhythm going, they would shoot then move their arms down, shoot and move their arms down
- They shot at the back of the army first then moved up closer and closer, that way retreating would not help them at all
- The Battle of Goninhood was a failure, but the Battle of Nicrea was a victory
- Both sides loss great amounts, but that was why Nork kept reserves in Nicrea, Seven, Aldën, and Closewaters
- AA had another victory fast. They sneaked up on the reserves camp and burned a ring around it so there was no escape
- This came at a cost though, Nork was captured by Hades’ army
- He was taken to Northern Ywar, where he was unreachable
- With that win though they were able to capture all of Southern Frando Venas
- The leader of AA was Sycas for awhile
- When he was trying to lead AA right into a trap he confessed
- Sycas was actually Sonoku, the Housonseven, in disguise as Sycas
- When they took Hades to the top of the mountain they also had taken Sycas
- Then they cut off Sycas head and made it look like Hades, only if he could promise the downfall of Southern Tamyara. He stayed in a cave waiting for the perfect day to strike, I told him when. Burning down the Silver Coast was step one, then came Weston.
- At this they beheaded the imposter, they never did see Sycas’ face that was how they fell for it
- After this the position went to Joc, a half-breed, part Tamyaran part Acronian. He grew up there so he had a very heavy Acronian accent. Acronia was an island off the coast that got destroyed during the God War
- He made them take up base in the abandoned homes of Frando Venas
- They soon started attacking the Northern part of Frando Venas
- They were able to take over all of it, at the expense of Nork’s suffering
- They stayed there and rested up
Legends IX: End of Nork (The Last Battle)
- Starts off with Nork chained up not able to do anything
- He was almost dead, just hanging there
- He had the Ky, a form of the shakes and he had an open cut that continued to bleed throughout the night
- His blood loss was reaching critical and he was banged up from the beatings they had given him, he was about to give in
- Then one of Hades’ slaves walked in to speak with Nork
- The slave untied him and drug him to the overlook, so he could see all of Tamyara
- He saw the three other corners of Tamyara, which were Aldën, Goninhood and Frando Venas
- Most of the area called Aldënhood was burning, parts were already burnt to the ground
- He also saw most of Frando Venas in flames
- The area known as Vëlëz (Demon’s Lair), where Nork was staying, was untouched by the flames
- Thinking to himself he knew he made a mistake leaving AA and going off to fight ahead of the pact
- He knew he would pay because of this
- The slave then started to recite a ritual, she took a knife and put it to Nork’s throat making small cuts
- The few drops of blood that fell from his neck the slave caught and put into a vial
- Then the slave poured the vial into a steaming table, then from a desk she took a map of Tamyara
- She put the map over the steaming table and the steam, now red with the blood, came up onto the map and shown the areas of Frando Venas and most of Hgeishea Cyrnar were covered in the red steam
- The slave then said something in an ancient tongue and left Nork alone. The words she said were Hedaes von Juhds Wadvc (Hades will fall soon)
- Nork knew these words, for Thermop thought it well to teach him when he was studying for Berryship.
- Nork looked out of the tower once more seeing the small islands, what was left of Weston. Then he saw Seven, still bright and peaceful as it always was
- Nork passed out
- He awoke, chained once again to the wall, he was relieved knowing almost everyone was okay
- Nork fell asleep again
- Hours later the sun shined into his face waking him up, he noticed he was not alone
- On the other side of the room was another chained up prisoner, he noticed who it was, Salvador. He was one of Nork’s generals. A great fighter, one of the only ones to actually be close to Nork’s talents. He would never betray Aldënhood and would rather have died then give up information.
- There was a slave also, who walked over to Salvador.
- Salvador looked up and spit in the slaves face.
- The slave looked up at Salvador and spoke to him
o Salvador, Hades told me you tried to kill him. Now, tell me why you would do this Salvador? He has treated you well, all this time working under him he treated you as well as a son and you want to kill him? You…you’re a high ranking general in AA aren’t you? Tell me, Salvador, where is your weak spots, he will let you live if you tell him information.
o Ah, slave, you don’t get it do you? All this time working for Hades, only in the end to want to kill him. Did you really think I was loyal to Hades? What is the matter slave, your shaking like you have the Ky.
o You…you traitor.
o No, I am loyal. Loyal to Aldënhood.
- The slave took a rod and drove it into Salvador, his body slumped over the rod. Then the slave took the rod and drove it again into Salvador.
- He turned and walked towards Nork, wiping off the rod as he stepped
- The rag he wiped it onto he threw at Nork’ face
- Nork kicked out knocking the rod loose, pulling on the Exodus strength he broke the wrist chains off and jumped onto the slave
- The slave punched Nork in the face and Nork snapped his neck
- Nork now had to find a way out, and a weapon
- On his way down the stairs he found a sword and shield
- He kept running towards the ground floor, on his way he saw slaves and tied up AA soldiers being carried to a chamber. Nork noticed that they were armed and there were too many for him to fight, he ran on.
- At the door he saw two soldiers standing, he came up and put his sword to ones throat and recited the words
o In the name of Thermop himself, I rid of you
o You wouldn’t dare try to kill me when my friend stands ready with his sword
o Really?
- Nork killed the first one and spun fast killing the next, he had made it out of Vëlëz and now was in Ywar
- He ran towards the border of Ywar and hid in a cave, he slept that night, hunting animals for food
- Once rested he ran towards the border again, there were Hades’ Honor Guards there. To many for Nork to escape, so he took out the one in the last row, dragging his body to his cave
- There he got into the Honor Guard armor and walked back with the crowd
- This worked for awhile until they turned and saw him
- They knew it was not who was usually there and attacked him, ripping off his helmet
- They saw who it was and brought him to the top of the tower, again
- Here Hades took Nork by his left arm and cut it straight up, tearing muscle and much more
- Back in Frando Venas, every single one of Hades people were killed
- They headed towards the border of Hgeishea Cyrnar now with warriors bordering it
- They saw Hades’ army there also at the border
- They attacked with a huge clash
- Then they heard a roar, the roar of a storm called the Tyrantca, ancient terms that meant ‘The Killer of Many’
- The storm hit once every two hundred years, and it hit now taking out many of AA army and very few of Hades’ army
- The storm lasted for hours till it finally cleared up
- The Battle of Hgeishea Cyrnar was a failure, they had to retreat and had to get reserves
- Nork was trying to think of a new way to escape from this place
- He was staying calm and building up his strength and body
- He knew that soon Hades himself would enter, and most likely challenge Nork to a duel of the fates
- So he thought of phases he could do to rebuild his body
- To start off he had to do the Anacrowphase, by the next full moon (with no show of Hades in all of these) he would heal his left side arm gash
- Then came the Telacrowphase, by the next ‘bark of the moon’ or full moon he would recover his inner body injuries
- Procrowphase meant he had completely recovered from his left arm gash and have all inner body injuries at 100%
- Metacrowphase is by the next AA victory he would completely heal his upper half
- Then was the Telocrowphase, by the time Hades’ arrives the Exodus would be full intact and ready for a full fledge battle, of course it would still be hard with one arm almost useless
- AA attacked Hgeishea Cyrnar again, still losing many troops when crossing the Shorned Mountain Range
- They were able to take shelter at the beach area of Aastrilunea to heal up
- Then Hades’ came by boat attacking by surprise, luckily they got away
- They retreated back into the Shorned Mountains
- They sent out a messenger to send out all reserves, they were ready to end this war
- Weeks passed by when the reserves arrived, with the mass of their army now AA was able to finish off Hgeishea Cyrnar
- At this time Nork was finishing the Metacrowphase, almost fully healed now, he had been lucky with Hades not showing up yet
- With AA closing in on the tower he would arrive soon
- Nork was now fully healed, now he slept until Hades arrived
- Nork awoke and looked around, he noticed where weapons lay and bones and knew best where to jump to
- Hades arrived finally talking with Nork (purple folder paper write up)
- Nork broke off the chains grabbing the old sword on the ground and swung up
- They battled for a long time swinging back and forth the clashes loud
- Nork was able to get rid of Hades long enough to punch him in the face and knock him off guard
- Then Nork charged forward and hit him again, Hades blocked it and swung back fast
- Nork ducked and stabbed, Hades got it right in the gut
- Nork took Hades to the edge of the tower and screamed out
o Hades, your lord, is dead!
- Nork then headed out of the tower and went into battle with AA, only he had a feeling he would die that day
- AA was attacking Ywar, the last Hades controlled area
- Ywar though had the greatest defense they had ever seen
- They clashed at the borders, huge explosion of powers
- Nork marched on, many were dying
- Nork carried Hades’ head when he rode in on the horse, it boosted the hope for AA
- Hades’ army got angrier; they came at them with brutal blows. One blow sliced through Nork’s horses’ legs.
- The leader of Hades’ Army, Feynar, left from the battle field and did not return
- Nork took this as retreat and led straight at the army
- Nork led the forces closer, taking them down more and more
- Nork was caught off guard and was stabbed right in the chest, he fell with a thud
- Coughing blood and breathing heavily he tried to scream out
- He couldn’t, he was beginning to pass out
- Nork stopped breathing, everyone stopped and saw Nork laying there, dead
Legends X: Dawn of the End
- Feynar was running fast towards a huge cave
- He saw Xejad, the Demon King, sitting in his cavern
- He begged Xejad to come help in the battle
- Xejad picked Feynar up and crushed him
- Then Xejad left the cavern and headed towards the battlefield
- AA charged at Hades’ Army to make them back off.
- AA crowded around Nork’s lifeless body, and then they heard a small cough.
- Another cough, a little louder, then Nork’s eyes opened.
- He was able to sit up, he looked at the wound, a huge gash across his chest
- Nork was able to speak
o My people, I am weak. I cannot fight. I was knocked out. I could hear, but I could not speak. So I listened, closely, the sound of clashing battles, it was a victory. I almost died tonight; it makes you look at life closer. But even with a victory, never let them retreat, kill them all until they surrender and give loyalty to Aldënhood
- Nork let them head into Ywar while he waited. They started the first blow at dawn the next morning.
- Nork heard the clashing, hours and hours of clashing.
- Xejad was at the battle field; he ran past all of AA and headed towards Nork’s position.
- Nork saw him coming; he could stand now if leaning against a wall. He pulled back an arrow and let it fly
- The arrow hit Xejad right between the eyes, dead in seconds
- The clashing stopped, Nork was nervous.
- Then he saw AA coming towards him, followed by chained men from Hades’ army
- AA was victorious, no more Hades’ Army, no more evil
- 4 DAYS LATER
- They had arrived in Aldënhood finally
- There were huge feasts and celebrations, the women and priests came back from Seven
- Nork notices that Thermop is nowhere around
- He gets onto a boat to Seven
- There in the burial grounds is Thermop
- Nork walks up to him and sits down
- Thermop tells Nork he is dying
- Thermop tells Nork he has hours left to live, and that Nork only has days left in this world
- Thermop says he will pass onto the next life, spending life with Sevenberries past
- Thermop looked at Nork and said he had a story to tell him
- It happened in the land of Narok, over fifty years ago, right before Narok was destroyed
- A man named Ernte Magnef Rynisa, called Ernte, was a very happy man
- He had a newborn child that he cherished dearly
- The child was named Narok the Enchanted, the Son of our Sun, our new guardian.
- Ernte was the leader of Narok, the great place
- Then the Everglazing (ancient Nicrean warriors) attacked Narok, the no war peace place, and burned it to the ground. The only one left was a man named Icarus holding the child Narok
- Ernte was captured and killed, but he was a Sevenberry and passed on
- A woman named Vischilla attacked Icarus, taking the child
- Thermop stops at this point and turns toward Nork saying: The child was you, and I was Ernte
- Nork just sat there, in shock and belief at the same time
- Then Vischilla brought Narok to Hades, who took him in and named him Nork
- Thermop also told him something else, a terrible thing
- Nork’s mother was he Goddess Neverlane, the mother of the most famous villain, Hades
- Thermop was married to her and had a child, a happy life
- Then a different Hades had brainwashed her into believing Thermop was evil
- She left Thermop and went to Hades
- Where she changed her name to Vischilla and raised Nork
- She also had a child named Hades
- Nork did not like hearing that
- Thermop lost color in his face and passed on, his last words were: My son…
- Nork left and went back to the mainland
- There he celebrated
- ONE DAY LATER
- Nork’s wife had a child, Sharon, a girl
- TWO DAYS LATER
- Nork passed on into the next life, he was celebrated
- Nork would have a place put in Seven in his name
- TWENTY YEARS LATER
- Peace had ended, a new evil rose up
- This new evil rose and AA was ready for it
- This time led by Sharon, the daughter of Nork and first woman warrior
- The battle lasted for three days, that was it
- This caused a return, Narok the Enchanted came back from Seven
- He saw his daughter, his wife, his friends
- But he had to leave that day, being out of Seven was what killed Thermop, but he was able to say hello
- Narok left and everyone cheered his arrival
- THE END
Tamyara Ends
- FIVE HUNDRED YEARS LATER
- Tamyara is still thriving, growing into a big civil nation
- But civil war has taken over and their civilization crumbles to nothing
- All they ever new was lost, all advances in technology were gone, housing and steel weaponry were a thing of the past
- Pets like the chockenhooven were slaughtered for food and were driven to extinction
- Everything gone in a single civil war, killing 75% of their population
- No one left alive ever knew about ancient Tamyara or Aldënhood
- ABOUT 1300 YEARS LATER
- An invasion of the once Silver Coast occurred
- These people dropped off men, they spoke in a weird different language
- They killed off the Tamyaran savages until few were left
- Many were killed off until only the children’s children’s children who never heard of Tamyara and Aldënhood were left
- What little were left did not know what civilization was, what iron weaponry was
- Narok the Enchanted arrived for his visit to these lands, they looked at him and attacked
- Narok left and went back to Seven
- Now all the savages spoke of the white being attacking them
- Later Narok’s arrival was lost in the stories of the white men attacking from the water
- Now the savages were lost in time, and Tamyara erased from history
- The white men told their own story, speaking their own language, never knowing what the savages said
- No one ever heard of Tamyara’s history because no one knew what Tamyara was, Tamyara never existed in white man speak
- Writer’s quote:
o But I know Tamyara existed because I was there. I fought those wars, lead in those wars. See, I am writing their history from my land, my land of Seven.
- No one ever spoke what the savages spoke so their history was lost.
- All that was left is Australia and its history

Coming soon is a prequel, the prequel will be:
Ernte: The Untold Story of Thermop

Subject to change is the name of Thermop, I am taking suggestions.

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