L.A.S Heros (Demo)

[mikeylowd]

This is L.A.S Heros

This is the first game i've made so please don't get to angry.

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If you dont like the names of my ppl then go punch yerself in the face.

Story

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Starts off with Luneth (main charector) waking up to a normal day, then well basically, the world's getting corrupt by evil people, not gonna say whom, cus its a major spoiler. Basically everyone you thought was, isn't. There are four cristals of life that all the evil guys are trying to distroy to get to the major one so he can get eternal power. After luneth gets knocked out by this guy in a clocke, (His name is Zanth), He keeps him live after distoying his town and killing everyone. After getting knocked out, you get switched over to Mikey. He is ordered by the king to deal with the evils of the earth Nymph. Well, after they finish, Mikey, and Cameron, (you'll meet him later on ) They will start to notice the kings intentions being a little wronge. but Felix ( the kings main gaurd) has his head to far up his butt to realise that the King isn't what he thinks he is.

Charecters

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Luneth: Main charecter
Mikey: 11 year old boy whos' curiousity gets the best of him. While wondering in the city he notices Felix (who is ordered by the king for a sercret assingment) walking into a flying ship. Well Mikey has never been, or saw one befor so he dicides to follow Felix to check it out. What he doesn't know is that this dicision will put him on a journey he'd never know.
Felix: Was a knight for the king.
Alex: Rouge found by a campsite.
Cameron: Asked to join Mikey and Felix on their quest for the king so he could show the king he is worth being a knight.
Zanth: Distroyed Luneth's Town, why... you'll have to play to find out.
King Kuja: King of Lathesys, power hungry dictator who wants to control EVERYTHING!
I STILL HAVE TO FIGURE OUT EVERYONE ELSE.
These are all the ones I have so far.

 

[hellhound]

Hehe, I'm not basically the type of Member who knows how to make a good game thread, but I think it needs the "story, characters and etc." informations, putting screenies is nice, but isn't enough, btw, you can find good Fonts out there to use to write your Title's name, cause it looked like you wrote it bare paint tool at MS Paint, I suggest use the one with the Icon "A" at MS Paint to use fonts to write down words. btw, your battles are nice, I can't do something like that (with life bars above heroes) geez, my Battle system sucks, I suck.^^

 

[Numb]

Ugh. You might wanna post in the mapping improvement thread.
That mapping is ugly.
I always liked that battle system though =].
And what's the story?!

 

[hellhound]

Ugh. You might wanna post in the mapping improvement thread.
That mapping is ugly.

Whoa! hehe, you never had to be too prank! ^^;

well, I agree, you need work on mapping!, you can use cave walls for the edges and remove those flowers. ^^

 

[Sawnik]

Uhh... in order to others to play this game, you need to put up the whole project folder, not just the game.exe.

 

[mikeylowd]

Uhh... in order to others to play this game, you need to put up the whole project folder, not just the game.exe.

how can i do that (sorry im trying at least)

Plus i kind alike how the title is

 

[Numb]

When making a game you shouldn't focus on what you think about the game.
You should focus on what your peers think.

 

[mikeylowd]

I like how my title is. If my peers thinks something should be diffrent, like if its major, then yes, I will change it, Like the mapping, yeah, I should look into that. But the title is something that I realy injoy in my game and I like how i made it. If I had Photoshop then it might be diffrent, but for now, IMa keep it liek this. Thanks for the heads up though.

 

[Numb]

Nobody likes that microsoft paint look though.
You could just get it professionally done.

 

[mikeylowd]

I'll look into it, think you for yer opinon though, but do u know how i can attach my whole file to the download?

 

[Numb]

Compress the data.
(File-> Compress Game Data.)
Then click "Encrypt data"
Then send the whole compressed file. (File.exe)

 

[RATED-RKOFRANKLIN]

You can use gimp if you want to change your title. It is a freeware version of photoshop. :biggrin:

 

[mikeylowd]

U should beable to download it now, thanks

Hey tell me if it works or not. That would be very useful xD

 

[ebhz.Ash.4rm]

This looks quite terrible, spelling mistakes here and there and the information is scarce. You should definitely get more written down and run it through word or open office so you can get the grammar and spelling mistakes sorted. The title screen looks cheap, the MS paint brush tool writing is an immediate put off, at least just put the name in the type tool on a black background or something basic because it doesn't seem like you have many or any graphic design skills.

For the characters you should just use the top left sprite to show them as putting the whole set there clutters up the thread and no one wants to see the whole thing anyways. You can put all the screenshots in one spoiler tag, and also put names in the spoiler tags by putting <spoiler="lololol"> Picture </spoiler> (replace <> with []) so you can put the names of what's in the spoiler which cleans up the thread more.

The information on characters is pretty much non existent which should be fixed, also wtf? 11 year old kid asked by the kid to work for him??? Why not order a 44 year old vet.?

Not gonna download or play, the thread says enough.

 

[mikeylowd]

Alright im gonna take the download off and im gonna edit some stuff. And it snot that I have no graphic desing skill, I just thought it would be diffrent yea know... but i failed. And its not all pland out so thats why theres not much charector info.