kaos' Template

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Here it is :

Spoiler: Sprites I'm Working On

Unfinished

Comments and criticism are appreciated :D

 

[Balore]

Cool. Fast walker.

 

[Mac]

I like it alot! Its got quite alot of room open for detail aswell :D

 

[Kiniko]

That looks awsome! Are you going to make a female one?

 

[Danny]

Great looking template, small enough for most tilesets, while big enough for detail. Though the legs seem to stretch out too far in side views.

 

[RavenTDA]

Hmm nice. But adding the pelvic bone on the front view makes it look a little funky. That might be too much detail for something so small. The side view's second frame looks a little funny. I'm not likeing how that arm is bent. The top part of the arm looks way shorter than the bottom. Naturally they should be about equal length. He steps forward a little bit much. Like he's trying to take long strides while sneaking (know what I mean?). They seem a bit stretched like Hydrolic said. I also feel like the arms need to be a teeny bit longer as well. Arms while resting usually hit around mid-thigh and you have the hands level with the crotch. They should be just a bit longer than that. Also remember if the arm bends it becomes shorter in length. In quite a few spots you have the arms reach about the same spot even though one is bent. The shading however is very nicely done. I don't really see any problems there. Hope that helps you out.

 

[Diddle]

http://xs204.xs.to/xs204/06315/Neo8Template.png[/IMG]
Haha, afro man.

sorry for double post. accident!

 

[ryanwh]

I like it. About the size of vex(which IMO is the perfect size) but with a better formed face and no mitten hands. Good show!

 

[Cortez]

I love it. I remember you showing it to me on irc and telling me how you got the name, which I thought was pretty clever. Are you still using the Neo8 name? You haven't mentioned it.

Either way, it stands to be a nice and solid template.

 

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@Virtreous: I may eventually after i finish fixing this one.

@Raven: Thanks alot. I'll try and make the stride smaller and fix the arms. Now that you pointed them out I can seewhat you mean.

@Cortez: I will use Neo8 if I can't come up with something new, but I want to set it apart from Despains Neo7 template.

Thanks for all your comments, sorry I didn't reply yesterday but my internet died and is still a bit dodgy.

 

[Artia]

very good...

 

[Zodiac]

Awsome! I hope you plan on making a female template to join lonely ol' Adam

 

[Kisa Yukaki]

I reaaally loved your template. o_O!

Just like ryanwh said, the size of vex it's just perfect. ^_^ It's easy to edit and yet, we can add many details on it. *-*

I even tried to do some random hair (it's pretty ugly, but hehe, I just tried to use the normal rtp hair on it... I kinda like it x_X)
X_x There it is:
http://i74.photobucket.com/albums/i270/YuunaAkashi/Neo8-01.png
(Eww... Thinking better, this hair is really ugly x_X I guess I have to work a little more on it >_>)

I hope you plan on making a female template, it would be just perfect. ^_^

If it's okay for ya, I guess I'm going to use them in my game... o_O They're so perfect for me. *-*

 

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Yeah if you want but it's going to be changed on the sideviews and the pallette might change as well.

After I finish the male template completely i'll have ago at making a female one as well.

 

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*UPDATE*

Updated the character that I was working on, it will have armour eventually :\

 

[Jstreet]

Hmm, his downward motion has a bobble head. It doesn't like move correctly with the body.

 

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@J: I'll try and fix it when I get an animating program.

*UPDATE*
Updated the character i was working on again.
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y76/Ca ... ndhame.png[/img]

 

[Darksydaz]

How tall are those characters...? per say... (sorry i'm posing this from school so i really have no idea...

 

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They're about the same size as the VEX Template.