Joana [W.I.P]

[badmonur]

Just starting to work from my concept, tell me what you guys think.
His eyes will be open in the finished piece

http://i49.photobucket.com/albums/f251/ ... etcopy.gif[/IMG]

 

[brainstorm]

I like how you work anatomy and combine it with spriting. Most can't do that... well... This is awesome... How many colors do you use for each color?

 

[badmonur]

I like how you work anatomy and combine it with spriting. Most can't do that... well... This is awesome... How many colors do you use for each color?

why sankyou, i use about four shades

http://i49.photobucket.com/albums/f251/ ... t005-1.jpg[/IMG]
maybe that will help

 

[$t3v0]

Go Badmour, It's your birthday! Go Badmour, It's your birthday!

Woop woop!

Class!

 

[CeruSkye]

Beautiful pixel work there.

 

[Venetia]

The face and facial hair are wonderful!

I wish his "goggles" on his head had more rounding, though. The shapes are little little blocky.

You do excellent work with your dithering and shading :')

 

[badmonur]

Blocking out colors on the headcloth and neck. Finishing up the goggles.
http://i49.photobucket.com/albums/f251/ ... copy-1.gif[/IMG]

 

[Musashi]

A little grainy for my tastes, but very good nonetheless!

 

[Mascarpone]

the perspective on his goggles is reversed. The one that's farther away on the right side of his head should seem to shrink along it's X axis instead of getting larger, which is what it does.

http://img105.imageshack.us/img105/5668/uglyfixkj8.png[/img]

I fail at pixels i just slapped this together in MS paint in like 5 seconds, it's not a perfect example but it demonstrates the idea.

Kudos on the pixel rendering. As I've said before, The pixel and I have never been good friends.


Edit - Side not: Isn't Joana a girls name? o.o

 

[Despain]

It looks really rad so far, bro. I saw the name Joana and was expecting some Perfect Dark stuff- but this is better. It's not very often that you see black guys in video games.

I agree with the perspective on the goggles. And I think that you should cut down a bit on the dithering- use a little harder shading.

It's a cool start, man. Keep it up. I like the design.

 

[JD_Slasha]

Damn. That's all I gotsta' say.

 

[Samboy]

I do agree with Mascarpone, as the goggles should not sit flat on his forehead, as most peoples foreheads are not flat. Not unless he has been getting friendly with brick walls...

I must say, it looks very realistic. Keep it up.

 

[badmonur]

ok, going back. I was talking to a friend of mine Indago, a mod on pixelation forums. He gave me a few tipz and im going from a few steps back.
http://i49.photobucket.com/albums/f251/ ... howbad.png[/IMG]

 

[brainstorm]

looks better... and angrier... Nice job.

 

[Mascarpone]

Goggles are still wrong. Gogggllles ><

 

[badmonur]

goggles will have to wait >,<

 

[Mascarpone]

goggles will have to wait >,<

no no bad boy >< fix all the outlines and rough work before you go and render ><

 

[Grathea]

Looks better, and a lot less undithered. Goggles need to be fixed, though.

@Mascarpone - that may not be the way he works. I certainly like to outline, then fill, but everyone's different.