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I'd like some feedback on my site please.

lol@ yet another forum stealing our board descriptions. Although I can see why you would want to. After all, the few original forum descriptions you have are demonstrations in appallingly bad English. At least try to spell the name of your own project correctly  :crazy:
 

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http://btrc.exofire.net/forums/index.ph ... &topic=9.0

I love how you completely go against what your signature feels so strongly about.

i think that all of these rules are totaly aceptable and should be fallowed ata ll time thanks ben
i have had a problem with my xbox 360 can anyone help it has the three red lights on the front adn will not boot please help thanks your site admin Ben


if you can in vite the most members by

11/07/08

then you will win a place in the Global Moderators spot

So technically, Jack the Ripper could be a global mod for non related reasons to the job being offered to him? I don't think that's the way forward.

i think we need to get to know u first thanks ben but yes i think u will be able to help thanks ben
 
lots of grey, the use of Monotype Corsiva all over the place, frequent typos and grammatical errors (even in the banner!) ... What's not to love?
 
Mr. N":1qkk1l97 said:
the site looks about the same in IE7, Chrome, Safari, and Firefox 3, what's your issue with IE7?

its just that last night we couldn't acess our site from IE7 but we could in firefox
 
I like how you didn't address the comments left by the others. It makes it seem like you don't want feedback on your forum, more like you just want to advertise it.

prove me wrong by responding to everyone else's posts
 
Okay, well, heres my honest opinion.

It sucks.
The website is choppy and extremely bland.
You have way to many typo such as
"Allways" and "Newest Meber".

I think its pretty bad -- sorry
 
Apart from the horrid spelling (even in the top banner it says "allways") it's waaay too gray, making it seem boring. Spruce it up with some colour, but don't make things crazy.
 

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Steve Wilkos":3hik2u6r said:
do u speak english or not
No, he speaks CANADIAN!

Seriously though, not knowing English as a first language isn't a crime. If you want to correct his spelling for him in a constructive way go for it, otherwise stop harping the subject.
 

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Mr. N":h7oqhb7l said:
Steve Wilkos":h7oqhb7l said:
do u speak english or not
No, he speaks CANADIAN!

Seriously though, not knowing English as a first language isn't a crime. If you want to correct his spelling for him in a constructive way go for it, otherwise stop harping the subject.

I was just asking because if he did I was going to ask if he could please spell better

If it wasnt then I wouldnt mind proof reading over his site...I aint got nothing better to do :3
 

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