I want Crits Please!

[Lost_in_Exsistance]

Hey there, I was bored and decided i would try to draw my own stuff for my game starting with some face shots.

Could I get some of you to tell me what you think of this first one.
The Blond Girl.

Spoiler:     Scanned

http://img388.imageshack.us/img388/9171/scan001001fp8.png[/img]

Spoiler:         Colored in Photoshop - Not Very greatly colored

http://img363.imageshack.us/img363/236/girlcoloredjd8.png[/img]

Thanks.

 

[badmonur]

Its decent at best. Try to work on your lines a bit more. Clean em up and try not to pet them when drawing in ink. Be precise. When you paint try to find a light source and stick to it. Also try not to use shortcuts like fill tools or gradients.

 

[Shadow_Strike]

Work on line strength. Your lines are very scratchy and wispy and unclean. There are lots of black fill spots that you don't add to anything, such as in the bangs and behind the ear.

 

[vaynard]

Nice! as badmonur and Shadow_Strike said before, wok in your outline, one of the few ones that can make bad outlines and nice works is Yoshihiro Togashi XD, but well, I like that pic.
Respect on the colored version, try to give more streght to the shadows amd diferents colos to the hair.

Keep on working, it's all practice.