I need feedback.

[Halestorm5]

Half-Kaizers are tough, so I changed to using RTP. But, I need feedback on a 1 days worth of work.

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http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y144/Army100/Examples/MuscleGuyRTPSpritesetCurrently.png[/IMG]

Its all custom, and its a work it progress.

And for no real reason, heres his current battler.

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http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y144/Army100/Examples/MuscleGuyBattlerBattler.png[/IMG](I cant seem to manage his hair)

Also, this is my first full custom spriteset.

 

[Chiyo Osaka]

The hair/clothes are too saturated. The hair barely has texture/shape to it at all, and the hair looks like an afro on the side. The shading on the shirt makes it look like he has...female attributes.

On the bright side, the battler looks pretty good.

 

[Samboy]

First, remove the black outline from around his head. That doesn't follow suit on the rest of his body, so POOF! Begone!

Desaturate the colors on the entire sprite, and remove the outline around the shoes. Apart from that it is fairly decent.