I made some Characters ^^

[Sapphire]

Well I was making some charsets and wondering, if they were any good...
They are my first attempts, so dont be too hard with your critiques...
Please tell me, what I can do to make them better. as I said, those are my first attempts, so please don't say "they suck ass!" give me a chance to get better

There are some HK and some FK...

~ The new one is the owner of a pub in my game, that used to be a gay-bar back in the future ~

 

[Cortez]

Agck! Desaturate! Quick, before they get you!

 

[Harlock]

Wow, very good work, i love second.

B-)

 

[crazymew]

their pretty good... not the best... but their okay... very nicely done... keep practicing and get better!

 

[Balore]

Not a fan of multi-coloured hair, but that's completely your choice.

To me, they are put together very well. I like the style. Nice gun!

 

[Sapphire]

I thought the colorfull hairstyles would match the colorfull clothes.

thanks for the "nice gun" that was really hard to make ^^
and thanks for all the other critiques.

 

[NexS]

they are some cool ideas... you just need to work on your spriting, but its a great start

 

[Tohsaka]

You really need to work on your line art... Especially with the gun, way to rounded. I suggest zooming in and working it pixel by pixel. And, desaturate it and add more "real" shading.

 

[Zavoria]

Those are pretty good, but the shadow strikes me as a little odd. You might want to make it more in the shape of the charecters or get rid of it completely.

 

[Sapphire]

I'll probably remove the shadow.
AtM I'm working on a newer version of the characters... in HK size. These are FK, as you might have seen. I try to increase the detail level a bit and I'm working on the shading on the clothes. I'll post them, when I'm ready (in a few minutes...)

http://img455.imageshack.us/img455/2532/ashar2.png[/img]

So, this is the new HK version of the character. I call him Ash ^^ please tell me if its good, or what's to improve!

 

[Jstreet]

Desaturate, shade better, the hair also looks unnatural.

 

[Sapphire]

Those are my first tries, please tell me, how I can make it better...

 

[JD_Slasha]

Well for one try using atleast 3-5 different shades in each color.. it'll add more depth.

 

[Sapphire]

I got at least 3-5 different shades for each color. Maybe I should take colors for the shading, that are brighter/darker than they are now?

 

[EmuMaster2002]

"They suck ass!", without the quotes!

Not bad, but desaturate them a bit, and the shadows added on look a bit odd... But I'm sure they look better in-game.

 

[JD_Slasha]

Lighten your tones. It's very hard to see the contrasting shades with the colors you've chosen being so bright.

 

[Sapphire]

You mean like this (jacket up;left):
http://img194.imageshack.us/img194/9704 ... ketvz7.png[/img]
i made the whole jacket in brighter tones.

 

[Sapphire]

Well, here is a new one. It's HK Leatherface from Texas Chainsaw Massacre.
He was really hard to sprite. Especially the chainsaw and the leather mask...

http://img131.imageshack.us/img131/1772 ... ot2di5.png[/img]

Zoomed:http://img82.imageshack.us/img82/5659/screenshot2ix5.png[/img]

He still needs to get the blood on his clothes, I think.

EDIT: bloodyhttp://img124.imageshack.us/img12 ... ot2hv9.png[/IMG]

~see all the newest versions (dsaturated ;P) in the first post~

 

[sweet_thing2090]

wow kool, luv it all! whered u get the tall template from?

 

[Sapphire]

wow kool, luv it all! whered u get the tall template from?

Thank you. It's the "Half Kaizer" Template. I thought everybody would know it. Showkaizer and Tana made the template.