Hunter titlescreen

[lnicol1990]

Hello.

This is the titlescreen for my new game, Hunter. The characters are from Naramura's site, and they are my main characters.

What does everyone/anyone think?

 

[seven]

It looks like you slapped a couple of Narumara battlers onto a cheesy background.

 

[blakependragon]

it seems like you're just trying to show off pretty naramura characters to get peoples' attention. you may need to better develop your game, and decide what you want the title to portray. also, it seems the actual title words "hunter" should be bigger, as YOUR GAME is more important than pictures. :

 

[Kraft]

Well... to fix that title, you could do several things...

First, use the burn tool to give the characters shadows on the background.

Second, get rid of the ugly line under the word HUNTERS. It does not fit the same style of the text, and looks very bad.

Third, like blake said, make the hunters word more important... it is the title of your game after all!

And lastly... Continue this game! And make it bad-ass too. (*cough*, Hunter is my real name lol *cough*)

 

[lnicol1990]

Okay, I've had a serious rethink.
One: My first title was far to busy with all the different characters.
Two: As Blake and Kraft have pointed out, my game name was way too small with a stupid underline.
Three: It missed an element that I really wanted. The box is actually part of the plot and it intertwines with the BGM that will be playing. Unfortunately, I don't know any sites that lets you listen to music rather than download it, so I can't share the BGM with everyone. Anyone interested can visit viewtopic.php?f=93&t=62226.

For some reason, it's showing the black outline which I spent *ages* getting rid of. I promise it's not like that on my file.

 

[Luthur]

Thats worst. Don't mix and match random images off the internet, it never makes a title screen look good. And the white background really doesn't work.

What program are you using? Because it looks to me something like Paint. Download Photoshop or Paintshop, and play around with the features in that.

 

[badmonur]

Honestly it looks like it was done in microsoft word and then screenshoted. I suggest reading some design tutorials or something.

 

[Kraft]

And get my name out of that font!

 

[lnicol1990]

Could someone lock this topic, please.

Someone has taken pity on me and my terrible attempts, and has offered to do the titlescreen for me. I won't post the end result, you'll just have to wait for the demo and the game, which I promise is coming once I have some free time from college.

And a reason why my attempts were so bad might be because I was using MSPaint. I'll try not to disapoint people with my game as my titlescreens have.

 

[RPGS]

No one are going to play your game if you do not make improvments, so post the new Titlescreen or people will be turned out. :haha: