HK Wips and My robo template WIP (PA)

[-Kira-]

Hi there. Please comment my wip arts.

Characters...:

Robo template...:

NEW!!

I try make own template...:

Thx for palettes Venetia :*

 

[illustrationism]

I like the third iteration best... The second one has too high a contrast. And forget the pink. lol

 

[-Kira-]

Hiya all i try make own template!!

http://img178.imageshack.us/img178/1868/templatenb3.png[/img]

 

[Emtch]

The HKs are nice, except the 2nd row. The male needs some work on his hair and his white pants.
The robo looked pretty good, but weird.
The template looks a bit odd; it's in the wrong angle/perspective.

 

[-Kira-]

I NEED MORE COMMENTS xD

 

[Akaire]

On your template, the head seems to be looking upward especially.  I'd recommend moving the eyes down about 3 pixels, then moving the whole head down a bit and maybe bringing the chin to more of a point.  On the other hand, the top of the head does look a bit too pointed, so maybe try to round it out a little.  I also think the collarbone looks too high. Make sure to look at some good references.  :smile:

In my opinion, the 3rd version of the sprite on the first row is your best.  I like the hairstyle on that one too.  For the others, try to shade according to the "flow" of the hair rather than shading from the outside to the inside.  This tutorial might be helpful to look at: Click here.
I hope this helps. :thumb:

 

[sixtyandaquarter]

The template's head looks upside down.
Honestly you can just flip it vertically and fix some shading and you'll have a better head.

 

[Calibre]

I really like the top normal HK.  And that bender would make a pretty funny villain.  You should contribute to the HK project too, how come all these spriters are coming out the woodwork recently!?