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[HK] Sam and Richie (Crits Please)

PLEASE GIVE YOUR OPINION OR TELL ME HOW TO IMPROVE THESE!

Here's a preview of two sets I started out of boredom of me and my friend Richie (though Richie doesn;t really look much like he does in real life, I think the sprite so far looks kinda cool).

I usually work with sprites much smaller, like RM2k3's 24x32, so using bigger sprites is something I'm still getting used to.

HKMePreview.png


HKRichiePreview.png


Well, comments please.

PLEASE GIVE YOUR OPINION OR TELL ME HOW TO IMPROVE THESE!
 
ok, for both sprites, you just seem to recolor the leg to get the pants, nope, don't do that, it result into an un-cotton-ly tight pants. While for the guys sprite, you need to work on the contrast on the hair a lot more, it just seems into a big black blob to me...
 
The yellow haired guy has probably the most ugly pants I've ever seen. skin tight an yellow?! :-!
As Legacy said, you need to work on the hair. But I really like the green shoes!
 

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